Review Detail of FeiNa in My Vampire System

I really love the plot and setting of this novel albeit the English writing has many faults. It's very interesting, refreshing and it kinda catch your attention. I'm aware that the author is not a native English speaker/writer, so I applause for his work. I do still think he need an editor to help out so if Mr Author is interested, I can offer myself to the job. Every time I read, lots of rephrase and editing happen in my head. It's kinda torture for me as an English literature n linguistics graduate. Anyway, a gem in a rock. Good work!!