Review Detail of Novel_Addict_98 in My Vampire System

I've only read 30 something of 900+ chapters, but I can't go on. I really like the idea of this book. I think the system is pretty interesting and could be fun. But, the writing is too immature for me. At first, I thought the MC was really stupid (as a lot of people will say in other comments), but then I realized that everyone is just as dumb. People call it plot armor, but it's really just the author not thinking through things and just making things happen to take to story where he wants it to go. For example, at one point MC says to himself something like, "I should test drinking other blood types." and just like that, some kid he sees as an enemy is suddenly walking through the woods right when he needs it. Or another time, someone dies and the teachers are investigating. MC is a prime suspect, so they put him under a truth ability of sorts and ask directly, "did you kill him?" MC says nope and they just give up just like that. No more questions. Another reviewer suggested that the Military in this book is more like a Sect in a wuxia novel. I think that's absolutely correct and the disparity there is far too annoying for me to keep at it. I started reading this because it's #1 in the power stone ratings and there are novels I really love that a rated much lower. so I wanted to check it out. Perhaps it gets better? I don't know if I care to find out.