Review Detail of Joey_Riccard in My Vampire System

One of the best novels I have ever read. The pacing is great and the way the abilities are set up is great. The only thing I can would change is to make the system more interactive. For example let’s use the blood swipe skill. Talking to the system Quinn could create a new skill blood swipe barrage by listing the difference between the original and the new skill. By firing one blood swipe it is larger and more powerful and a barrage they are smaller and faster. The cost to use it would be different as well. Another thing is he could learn skills that don’t have any thing to do with being a vampire or his shadow ability. For example Leo could have told him he had learnt all the basics of the military martial arts. Then the system gave him the skill just like he got the basic vampire martial arts. But all in all it is great and I look forward to continuing to read it.