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Unusualscholar
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This is a good story so far. The world itself and how its developed so far is interesting and has had a consistant and decent pace. Now my only Problem with the story so far was two moments near the beginning of the novel that felt a little forced. These being Layla’s and Vordens motivations for doing what they’re doing with only Vordens was explained in a satisfactory way. All in all I would say this novel is definately worth a try at the very least as after i got through those forced moments its been a very fun read so far.

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Hello reader, David here. So, I am a bit new to this site/app and so far, I must say that the experience is great. I was so lucky that I even got a collaboration with OSNOF (an author), to make a novel! There's a high probability that you know where this is going. Yes, this is self-promotion — but wait! I am tremendously sorry for the disturbance, but it is just that we need an audience that gives us motivation, assistance and knowledge in writing amazing stories. The reader and overall audience plays a significant role in the creating of a masterpiece. Without you, how would we be certain as to what works and what fails? OSNOF and I need you! The story we are writing is a first-time thing, this is our first novel here, and it started mildly slow and confusing, but there was a major improvement in the later chapters. Hop into a completely magical new world with our Main character (who has transmigrated) and watch him gradually grow and change. Watch as he struggles and fights his way against figures of utmost monstrosity! Our novel contains the most popular elements seen in Webnovels, including: A system, magic, fantasy, creatures, reincarnation, leveling, monsters, even our own things like elemental crystals, etc. Click on our profile picture and read ‘New World Archeria!’ today! Hopefully I did not disappoint anyone by this message. And Hopefully I did my part as OSNOF’s editor and novel promoter. Thank you, for you precious time. (Reading it is optional, if you are currently reading this novel, and is looking for another novel to read simultaneously, then our novel is highly recommended)