Review Detail of Dansh0k in My Vampire System

Not the OP but i would give a 1 star rating now if i were to review again (i think i reviewed at 2 stars back then) but i can't be bothered to do so, that being said i'll explain a bit about why i would give such a low rating, i can't judge too much about the world building and plot because i didn't read that far but the beginning of this novel is unreadable, the writing quality is terrible and it REALLY needs an editor to fix the grammatical mistakes, it just feels like the author is too lazy to fix it so he might as well get someone to help him with that because the initial impression is what will make readers stick to the novel instead of dropping it. Now that we got that out of the way let's talk about the story, the writing quality isn't the biggest problem in my opinion although it would play a big part in why i would rate this novel 1 star, as others have said in their reviews the mc's IQ is in the negatives, you can never call this mc a human being unless he is actually a mentally challenged person because he truly doesn't act like a normal person would in most situations, he's just too dumb and even if the author wants to write him in this way to make it more noticeable later if he starts acting smart in my opinion this isn't how you write character growth, it's not realistic and he should take notes from those shonen mangas like OP and Fairy Tail if he wants to write a slightly dumb mc who becomes smarter and more mature later because he grew up. Honestly, i don't know how Supreme Magus is only 5th place in the originals ranking while this novel is number 1 with ratings almost as good as Lord of the mysteries (imo the best novel in this site and one of the very few i would rate as 5 stars), i find it hard to believe that there isn't some kind of manipulation in the ratings here and it's ridiculous that authors can delete reviews just because they want to.