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Daoist732403
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All i can say is this : almost trash The characters are not well introduced. The world is not well developed we basically know nothing about it and i dropped the book at chapter 173. The MC is walking talking idiot. The other characters are the one more idiotic than the other. MC is way too trusting of everyone without any reason and he goes as far as to reveal his "secret" left and right. He even turned someone who betrayed him when even he himself know almost nothing about the powers he has and how to control them let alone guide someone else with weaker will as he is portrayed to be. It is more of a high school drama than a novel set in another time with super powers all around. I would not recommend it

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LoneLyDaoist
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i think this shit is popular cause author runs some kind of software with bots. There are way too many bots here giving 5 stars. can you believe writing of this quality getting 4.7 stars? Nuts completely nuts.

Shura_Asura
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Look at this review we have the same in common. I also stop at chapter 173 were the puppet thingy. I've been hoping the MC will developed as soon as possible which I tolerate 173 chapters but when he just let his girl "friend" taken controlled by that other overconfident vampire, I'VE LOOOOOST IT! Purely pathetic!

Xristodoulos_K22
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try abyssal lord of the magi world it is a 5 star novel in my opinion

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AnonymousOK
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no because it's a decent story (first volume only sucks but it gets better)

LoneLyDaoist:i think this shit is popular cause author runs some kind of software with bots. There are way too many bots here giving 5 stars. can you believe writing of this quality getting 4.7 stars? Nuts completely nuts.
LoneLyDaoist
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Lol 4.7 ? Decent story? Are you kidding me? Or you havent read any quality novels out there Try Lord of mysteries My house of horrors For orginal try The Oracle path

AnonymousOK:no because it's a decent story (first volume only sucks but it gets better)
AnonymousOK
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i have tried to read Lord of mysteries but it sucks. So what if i like this novel? i'm totally hooked on it and cant wait fore the next chapter

LoneLyDaoist:Lol 4.7 ? Decent story? Are you kidding me? Or you havent read any quality novels out there Try Lord of mysteries My house of horrors For orginal try The Oracle path
MILARCH
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can you tell me where you at now my friend ? am i at chapters 200 and its really make me feel worse that mc cant became smart once or more meticulous

AnonymousOK:i have tried to read Lord of mysteries but it sucks. So what if i like this novel? i'm totally hooked on it and cant wait fore the next chapter
AnonymousOK
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chapter 427

MILARCH:can you tell me where you at now my friend ? am i at chapters 200 and its really make me feel worse that mc cant became smart once or more meticulous
MILARCH
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somehow i got the monarch of evernight vibe from this novels. its almost the same theme?

AnonymousOK:chapter 427
RageSmirk
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The story is good, it's different from all those face slapping / hatered / revenge shit or cultivation bullshit also

LoneLyDaoist
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are you author? lol i cannot believe what i hheard. maybe you have short attention span and cannot distinguish masterpiece and a trash. Lol my vampire system is trashiest novel i have read in webnovel even i can write much better than the guy.

AnonymousOK:i have tried to read Lord of mysteries but it sucks. So what if i like this novel? i'm totally hooked on it and cant wait fore the next chapter
LoneLyDaoist
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No monarch of evernight has very intricate writing. This novel pales in comparision to misty rain of jiangnan's writing .city of sin is even better.

MILARCH:somehow i got the monarch of evernight vibe from this novels. its almost the same theme?
AnonymousOK
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it gets better and better in the second ark you probably only read like 100 chapters. the first time i started reading i also stopped because it sucked a lot but after a month i started reading again and it gets lots better

LoneLyDaoist:No monarch of evernight has very intricate writing. This novel pales in comparision to misty rain of jiangnan's writing .city of sin is even better.
AnonymousOK
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Then write a good story. If you can do it better than do it... Yes your right the first ark is bad but it gets way better after that and now i'm hooked on the story.

LoneLyDaoist:are you author? lol i cannot believe what i hheard. maybe you have short attention span and cannot distinguish masterpiece and a trash. Lol my vampire system is trashiest novel i have read in webnovel even i can write much better than the guy.
AnonymousOK
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Am i author? really haha Fun fact there are a lot of people who actually like the story

LoneLyDaoist:are you author? lol i cannot believe what i hheard. maybe you have short attention span and cannot distinguish masterpiece and a trash. Lol my vampire system is trashiest novel i have read in webnovel even i can write much better than the guy.
LoneLyDaoist
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mate i have been reading webnobels for 8 years i know trash when i see one. This site is skewed as bots are encouraged rather then being banned. Now you are telling me lord of mysteries is trash and this is good what a joke.

AnonymousOK:Am i author? really haha Fun fact there are a lot of people who actually like the story
WhatisLife
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I dont know what are you on about. You probably like trash novel like agt, Mga etc. How can you even compare lotm with this poor excuse of novel?

AnonymousOK:i have tried to read Lord of mysteries but it sucks. So what if i like this novel? i'm totally hooked on it and cant wait fore the next chapter
AnonymousOK
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No i dont like such novels it's just that the second ark is really good and i'm totally hooked on it

WhatisLife: I dont know what are you on about. You probably like trash novel like agt, Mga etc. How can you even compare lotm with this poor excuse of novel?