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Re_start
Re_startLv34yr
2020-07-06 05:54

this review is done out of spite... but naming his hellhound "fat tiger" ruined this story and my immersion, I didn't even find it funny. i wish the translator just gave us its name in chinese instead of a literal translation, can't even continue reading... so much potential, such a good story, somehow ruined by a NAME.

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Holden_Makok
Holden_MakokLv15

I highly suggest you keep reading. It's worth it. Oh and about names, I once named a dog "cat"

Re_start
Re_startLv3

No, I genuinely can't handle the name. It ruins my immersion.

Holden_Makok:I highly suggest you keep reading. It's worth it. Oh and about names, I once named a dog "cat"
Holden_Makok
Holden_MakokLv15

Think of a different name to give him, some people have done that with this story

Re_start:No, I genuinely can't handle the name. It ruins my immersion.
Re_start
Re_startLv3

If only my mind could do that lmao..

Holden_Makok:Think of a different name to give him, some people have done that with this story
Demonic_Ogre
Demonic_OgreLv4

tho "fat tiger" is a odd name I hope you continue reading as this novel is freaking great

Re_start:If only my mind could do that lmao..
Kadifichi
KadifichiLv11

Are you guys paid or something

Demonic_Ogre:tho "fat tiger" is a odd name I hope you continue reading as this novel is freaking great
Demonic_Ogre
Demonic_OgreLv4

no...?

Kadifichi:Are you guys paid or something
BobStudio
BobStudioLv5

I am being paid with chapters. Is that considered being paid? Lmao

Demonic_Ogre:no...?
BobStudio
BobStudioLv5

I am being paid with chapters. Is that considered being paid?

Kadifichi:Are you guys paid or something
Kevin_Arguelles
Kevin_ArguellesLv3

I tried reading until chapter 70+, but the Fat Tiger name really keeps making me cringe so I had to stop since its bugging me out.

Re_start
Re_startLv3

I couldn't deal with it for 2 chapters, I'm impressed by your endurance.

Kevin_Arguelles:I tried reading until chapter 70+, but the Fat Tiger name really keeps making me cringe so I had to stop since its bugging me out.
Kevin_Arguelles
Kevin_ArguellesLv3

Is there any way to contact the translator? If maybe he could change the name to chinese word or just completely change it since it's making many readers drop, especially those who are paying.

Re_start:I couldn't deal with it for 2 chapters, I'm impressed by your endurance.
Re_start
Re_startLv3

No idea, if you figure anything out please tell me, I'd love to keep reading.

Kevin_Arguelles:Is there any way to contact the translator? If maybe he could change the name to chinese word or just completely change it since it's making many readers drop, especially those who are paying.
_yokai0
_yokai0Lv10

Yeah, the immersion just fell apart after Fat Tiger. It was all smooth sailing up until that God awful decision.

Re_start
Re_startLv3

You're being severely underpaid.

BobStudio:I am being paid with chapters. Is that considered being paid?
coldpyr0
coldpyr0Lv14

I mean, a terrible naming sense is a stupid thing to stop reading over.

Re_start
Re_startLv3

Some people just can't handle it, tons of people dropped. "Fat Tiger" would work in a comedy novel, but in this it just ruins immersion. He's a DEMON not a HUMAN, if he was a human I'd still be reading. It ruins this novel's seriousness, and thus its immersion.

coldpyr0:I mean, a terrible naming sense is a stupid thing to stop reading over.
coldpyr0
coldpyr0Lv14

I mean, is there a reason a character in a stressful world, that is able to enter worlds that are based on fictional works, is unable to give their pet a silly name? Also, their is such a thing as culture differences, likely that names means a strong tiger, since strong animals eat more often than their weaker members. You just come off as whiny and pretentious when you complain about a name ruining the story in a story where he literally creates the t-virus.

Re_start:Some people just can't handle it, tons of people dropped. "Fat Tiger" would work in a comedy novel, but in this it just ruins immersion. He's a DEMON not a HUMAN, if he was a human I'd still be reading. It ruins this novel's seriousness, and thus its immersion.
coldpyr0
coldpyr0Lv14

Also, complaining about the seriousness of a novel that has the MC constantly making nerd references to fictional franchises means you obviously don't understand the premise of the story or its direction. Don't get upset because a story fails to live up to your misinterpretation of it.

coldpyr0:I mean, is there a reason a character in a stressful world, that is able to enter worlds that are based on fictional works, is unable to give their pet a silly name? Also, their is such a thing as culture differences, likely that names means a strong tiger, since strong animals eat more often than their weaker members. You just come off as whiny and pretentious when you complain about a name ruining the story in a story where he literally creates the t-virus.
Re_start
Re_startLv3

Whiny or not it isn't your place to try and change my opinion, the name ruined the story for me and many others. I am not alone in this, and as such, I feel justified. The fact is, it doesn't mean strong tiger( my first language is Chinese), there is a reason that a character shouldn't be able to give their pet a silly name, and that is called "immersion." Writing paragraphs because you don't agree with someone/starting arguments because you don't agree with someone just comes off as whiny and pretentious. Mans can't even spell "there" correctly and he acting like he knows what pretentious means.

coldpyr0:I mean, is there a reason a character in a stressful world, that is able to enter worlds that are based on fictional works, is unable to give their pet a silly name? Also, their is such a thing as culture differences, likely that names means a strong tiger, since strong animals eat more often than their weaker members. You just come off as whiny and pretentious when you complain about a name ruining the story in a story where he literally creates the t-virus.
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