Review Detail of Sleepy_Koi_Fish in E.S. System: Return to the Enchanted Planet

Writing Quality: [[5 STARS]]__Why?__ >>Well, the flow is very smooth and mellow. Not too~ complicated like an exaggeratedly complex documentary. No. The literature used easily shows the work and contemplation put behind it before publishing. It's easy on the lips(or ears or whatever). Stability of Updates: [[4 STARS]]__Why?__ >>Why did I not give 5 sensual stars to this category? Updating itself is a matter that questions the author(s)'s commitment, passion and whatever, it may sometimes not be the will of the author(s) that he/she fails to update regularly. It's currently 1chap/day if I'm correct, but I'd like to encourage the author to go an extra mile since I would one day love to see this book in the Top 10 power rankings. Nevertheless, it's still awesome! Story Development: [[5 STARS]]__Why?__ May lightning strike me if I dare say that the story development is less to wonderful. I'm seriously left emotional at the end of each chapter; sometimes you'll cry your eyes out but other times will be the contrast. Character Design: [[5 STARS]] I think I've said a lot already. Of course I'd LOVE to say more but I'm afraid that I'll 'accidentally' spoil the whole story XD World Background: [[5 STARS]] Thank goodness I didn't put an entry in the "Apocalyptic" category for the Webnovel 2020 Spirity Awards. Were it so, I would have been thrashed mercilessly by this novel. *sweats profusely*