Review Detail of Dark_Age in E.S. System: Return to the Enchanted Planet

Author, there are phrases that are repeated in chapter 1 when the MC's mother speaks; "Aaron, get down. You are so heavy you shouldn't let your brother carry you." Looking at his mother, Aaron tried get down, but Aiden wouldn't let him. In addition to this paragraph, there are a few more in its sequence that are repeated. You'll soon see them ... Overall, your novel is really promising and covers an interesting concept!