Review Detail of whoknowwhat in E.S. System: Return to the Enchanted Planet

Hello, Author here. This is the 10th review, so I did it. Just a heads up. Its a story of a teenager going back to the mana infested earth. It also a coming to age type to story. His small-time at the earth will mould him the man who will earn fear and respect in both Earth and Will (new planet) alike. And thank you for reading.