Review Detail of _Zenith in Armipotent

don't pass chapter 1 but you can see the plot armor? yikes, I don't mind the lower rating but you should truthful with your review. if the grammar atrocious for you just say so, don't need to lie to justify your low rating. I don't delete review unless what you complained don't exist in my story. it's chapter 1, the apocalypse just started, if you are playing the game, you just log into the game. how can you see the abundant plot armor? yikes. but that maybe was my fault, you lost not a few brain cells but many of them from reading my first chapter. I hope you can recover your lost brain cells.

bro, you were talking about the plot while you did not even pass chapter 1. that's completely a lie, I am not talking about my grammar, bro. look at your review, like I said if you said the grammar is atrocious, just say so, but don't lie about the abundant plot atmors while you did not even get to pass chapter 1. chapter 1 is always a prologue, so there's no plot there.

This character has zero ambitions for glory, and somehow has fought and killed hundreds of people at a time (on multiple occasions) with nothing but a steel pipe? If that's not plot armor I don't know what is. Considering this is at least somewhat a form of reality and hasn't escalated to cultivation, mystical powers, or high-tech weaponry, that idea is unfeasible and unbelievable even with the most avid of imaginations. THAT is plot armor. I can beat the world with just a steel pipe - does that sound right to you? I'm not replying anymore. As I said before, I sincerely hope your work achieves greatness and all that you hoped it would. I would highly recommend acquiring an editor to assist you with the grammar. Good luck!

first of all, this is fiction, something that does not exist in the real world. so stop comparing the real with a fictional world where magic exists. that sounds stupid to me. let me correct you, again. it's zombies, not people, also, killing people with pipe possible, you just need to hit the head. how do you know he does not have ambition while reading only chapter 1? stop assuming things, bro. You have to lie again to cover more lies, lol.