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_Zenith3yrCommentedIf I pay extra can I get some toxic substances or drinks?
It can be said that Carlos played the role of a psychologist for Noah, since they always talked about various things. Besides, when they were together, they always found a way to make the problems disappear without relying on drink or some toxic substance.- _Zenith3yrReplied to HotIce
This character has zero ambitions for glory, and somehow has fought and killed hundreds of people at a time (on multiple occasions) with nothing but a steel pipe? If that's not plot armor I don't know what is. Considering this is at least somewhat a form of reality and hasn't escalated to cultivation, mystical powers, or high-tech weaponry, that idea is unfeasible and unbelievable even with the most avid of imaginations. THAT is plot armor. I can beat the world with just a steel pipe - does that sound right to you? I'm not replying anymore. As I said before, I sincerely hope your work achieves greatness and all that you hoped it would. I would highly recommend acquiring an editor to assist you with the grammar. Good luck!
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So with the exception of the American family, all the others (particularly the staff members/workers) are all Chinese? Riiiight...
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Almost 7ft? Wat
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There was potential for evolution on other planets, maybe with more energy. But he criticized them for being too caught up in greed, vanity and violence, and also only barely making it to the moon let alone the stars.
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Telling an American they speak English well? Alright, I’ll bite.
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I tried, albeit barely. Poor grammar is a huge turn-off for me. On to the next waste of brain cells!
Tang Shaoyang directed his sharp eyes toward Hawk Talon who was 20 meters apart from where he stood. Not long after, Tang Shaoyang smirked, "Don't worry, Boss. I will bring that Bastard Pan's body to you." - _Zenith3yrCommented
I was pretty sure English was the most popular/used language, and I was correct. A quick google search tells me English is the most common language, followed closely by Mandarin. I'm actually really surprised to see Hindi as third. Neat, you learn something every day.
The Chinese language is the most common language on Earth, even though it is a bit more troublesome to learn. Luo Weike's enunciation was definitely not as clear as Tang Xueshan's. - _Zenith3yrCommented
The author himself claimed that once Di Di began cultivating no one would be able to sense or discover she had special eyes. Retcon or convenient forgetfulness?
"I'm certain. I could swear that such a genius would not appear even in 100,000 years. The True Dominion would definitely go mad if they knew that such a genius existed," said the middle-aged man resolutely. - _Zenith3yrCommented
It should say" -Di Di- stood up in alarm
"Ah Jiu, why are you being captured as well?" Di Jiu stood up in alarm, unsure of what to do, when she saw Di Jiu walking in. - _Zenith3yrCommented
Di Di not Di Jiu
"Yes, Elder Ming." Di Jiu accepted the array flag, yet she hesitated for a while before saying, "Will Ah Jiu be okay?" - _Zenith3yrReplied to KinghtariusWR
Its sad to know that sometimes good things dont last
Di Jiu did not know that the Galaxy Sect was about to be eradicated. The condensation of his Spiritual Force had reached its limit and his cultivation had entered the ninth-stage Golden Core Realm. This had all happened within four months. The only thing he regretted was that the blue spirit meridian had become small once again. - _Zenith3yrCommented
It says "Flying Boat" just a chapter up, and now "Spaceship". Do I blame the author or the translator? Which of you are slacking?
When he saw Di Jiu come out, Zheng Feisheng quickly stepped forward and said, "Brother Zimo, our spaceship has come across a Beast Tide. Don't worry, though. The flying boat that travels to the Sky Screen meets this kind of Beast Tide often. Under normal circumstances, it is not fatal. We still have to go up, though. If the flying boat has to face the monsters, anyone who does not go out to deal with them will be kicked out immediately." - _Zenith3yrReplied to algrife93
I really hope he meant 'joints' cause cracking my neck and back and stuff feel great, maybe it was just lost in translation lol
After spending 31 days at the Swallow Capital University's Institute of Martial Arts, Di Jiu experienced the same sensation he had when he had conquered the first stage of Qi Refinement. A soft mist gathered around the Baihui Meridian as the short period of time that had lapsed transformed into a heavenly cycle. This caused the bones in Di Jiu's heavenly body to crack, which made him feel more relaxed than ever. - _Zenith3yrCommented
The author changed how tf all this happened. Go back and read the chapter where he saved Qi (or w/e his name was) with surgery. He killed the man and buried him at the back of the herb place he's staying now. He never threw him into a trashcan. The author retconned sh*t and changed the story on the fly to make this lame bs happen.
Di Jiu heaved a sigh of relief before he tightened his grip and crushed the man's throat, smashing the bones inside into pieces. It seemed like he had overestimated Bi Zhengsheng. He had just found that footage by accident. - _Zenith3yrCommented
It's not your fault the author retcons your actions and makes you stupid Di Jiu. You buried the body at the place you're staying, yet magically in the last chapter you threw it into a trash can in front of cameras.
It seemed like Shi Jinshan had been right. The Rising River Building was just a facade for the Morgue Ring. What Di Jiu did not understand was how Bi Zhengsheng had found out that he had been the one to kill that guy. - _Zenith3yrCommented
The MC buried the body in the back of the place he's staying. What trashcan nonsense is this?
The long-haired young man entered the room carefully and bowed before him with utmost respect. "Master Sheng, we've found He Shan. This morning at almost 6am, we captured on one of the surveillance cameras at the Wan Ba District a young man throwing He Shan's body into a trashcan. He Shan's body is being brought back as we speak." - _Zenith3yrCommented
So safe politicians will have you and/or your family murdered if you say something out of line.
Di Jiu was too shocked to speak as he stared at Fei Qi. According to the memories he had obtained about his previous life, China was supposed to be a safe place with an exceptionally tight security system. Besides, if Tan Yueyue wanted him to go to the Rising River Club, that meant that the Rising River Building was a public place that everybody knew about. How could it be unsafe? - _Zenith3yrCommented
I never understood this. “I honestly dont think i have a martial root so im making wise choices early in life and giving myself more options to succeed on the path ive chosen in the future.” This makes him a laughing stock? Only in China i guess...
He did not tell anyone of his intent, as he knew that, if word got around, he would become a laughing stock.