Review Detail of 0Akai0 in Necron: The Legend Of Rezar DeathWind

Writing Quality : Good english Stability of Updates : It's free 5 star 'cause i don't care about stability bs Story Development : i drop at chap 111 i won't spoil but you **** your story like all the character development you did on Rezar seem to be useless.... Character Design : Most character apart from priest seem robotic and are pretty bad like the so-called princess acting all important while she clearly overstep her postion a lot ( chap 111 i just want to smash her ) World Background : Pretty innovative and cool Anyway i drop i really like the idea but you make it seem so bad with how the story happen and the character any way good luck and it wasn't for the world background and the the free 5 star the story would be pretty much only value 3.5 star. Good luck with your story. for me it's the end