Review Detail of HotC0C0 in Searching for Andromeda

I gave a 3 for writing quality because its decent. Some things need to be reread twice but nothing horrible. 4 for Stability of Updates honestly just because I haven't read it in a while and had a stockpile going. 1 for Story development because of overuse of switching viewpoints that drag the story on. Its like Im watching an Indian drama where something happens and I need to see the viewpoints and reactions of every single character there. Something happens to the mc and we get this flashback and then another flashback for the other character and if another character happens to be in both in the flashback and in the scene then they also get a flashback even though its the same material. It gets really irritating reading this when One second i'm reading what the mc is doing and abruptly it changes viewpoints. This I wouldn't normally have a problem with but its done sooooo many times. Then you get a change in viewpoint to something that has already happened to the mc but earlier in the story from a side characters point of view. lots of information is being reiterated and Im paying to read content that i've already read. 4 for character design because I do like the characters that are in this story and even though i did say that the problems in the story development part makes it hard for me to continue reading it, it does add to the characters and gives them more life than what i've read in other stories. If the author could stop the repetition, stop the over use of flashbacks and switching viewpoints and progress the story clearer than I'd really enjoy it a lot more. 4 for world background. I think the author did well in showing the world the characters are in as they go from one area to another. Overall I would say read it, its good and the characters aren't 1 dimensional from what I read so far. I will probably continue reading it when I don't have anything else to read only for the reasons I put in the story development part so far.