dropped chapter 1 that's why 3 stars for everything except writing quality. reasons 1 sizing of kingdoms and empires if fucking stupidity large 2 even if your kingdom is based upon magic or technology at some point it be merged not clearly defined like this. 3 not clear on MCs age, said she got engaged at 12, at some point she traveled to stay with fiancé not even 14 yet. based on first chapter these are the most damaging aspects found that are annoying
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