Review Detail of PleasantPresent in I'm rewriting it.

The writing quality is good and the stability as well. The story development is a bit lacking but that is because there are a lot of good sex scenes. The characters are all different, though there are quite a few centaurs and only a few orcs. The world background is interesting but till now hasn't been shown a lot and instead been mostly vaguely described though the part that was shown was good. The orc futar that is the mc gets turned into a normal human girl, which I think disliked quite a few but since this story is named an orcs journey I expect her to turn herself back after expanding her harem and building the story up. To summit up, it's pretty good and needs more readers.