Review Detail of Gralorn in Rise My Elementals!

First if all, I have only read this novel up to chapter 29 and I don’t plan to read further. My review is based on that. Truthfully I would like only to rate this novel but I need to write a review to do so, so I try to do some decent work while trying not to spoil anything for those who give this novel a try. Writing quality: Mediocre up to this points with minor mistakes. Grammar is readable, author promised grammar improvements after chapter 100. Updating Stability: As far as I checked updates were stable. Story development: The story is full of flaws, mistakes, illogical character interactions, decisions and events. M Character design: While the author said MC matured early because of events he is childish. Main female lead is stupid, the enemies all behave like spoiled, stupid brats. Word setup: Lot of errors, overly simplified parts and bad illogical designs. The novel felt like a creation of a very very very novice author’s first try. This should be rewritten at least until the parts I got to. For the rest I cannot give an opinion. Would I recommend this? No. There are much better choices I think.