Gralorn
I am just your everyday cultivator. My dao is the dao of daoheart.
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An average population of 2500 people/village is huge.
I like how his moral struggle was written. [img=recommend]
Generally it should be not possible at this point. It should take a long time to do that. They could become under his rule, but cannot be merged with his current subjects. Too many people died and have to much grievience against eachother.
Author you should rewrite this part because it is illogical, additionally it breaks the immersion and read flow. But overall your novel is quite enjoyable so far.
I see. Then you were using it right. Thanks for explaining.Hard to tell sometimes because the tone someone would use doesn't necessarily come through when writing/typing.
Sorry I cannot post my long answer. I don't even know if this reply will get through or not. Some error -1000002.
Sorry to the author that my english was not up to par and what I wrote might have came through as rude. Thank you for pointing it out. As a reader I stated that I am expecting an explanation in the story. It is the author's choice to give or not. And it is my choice to pay for his/her work and continue reading or not. If I see somethng that bothers me as a reader I state them in the comment section. And I state that too that if I like something. And when I see something that is just not in line with a character, I expect a good explanation from any author in later chapters. Else the writing is just pure bad in my opinion. And I think you use the hypocritical word wrongly here. I was rude and my style was unintentionally overboard, that is true.
It is okay. We are telling different opinions. I am happy you liked it. [img=recommend]
No point to write this mother side part of the story because nothing happens. She drinks tea and that is all. To tell who her father is could had been told at other times.
Story is mediocre with a lot of cliché. MC has no character development. The Art is decent. After roughly the first half of the story it feels that there were problems during the creation of the chapters. The story became a mess. Ending is abrupt and nothing is closed. It is basically axed and marked by webnovel as finished. I don't recommend this to anyone because of this. Better spend your coins in something else.
This doesn't change my opinion. Hinting at their own son to support them. It is fine if their son gives them as present without hinting or asking. But hinting at it, it is just shameless as parent, they are not disabled or unable to help themselves. And I know their son happily helps them.
what about the money?
Oh now this is a nice surprise. Thank you for reading my comment and replying author. [img=recommend] In singleplayer games yeah, but I was talking about MMO games where there are only general classes. No limited numbered unique ones. Since this is a novel I expect to see differences, especially in High tier unique classes. In this case it is totally acceptable. Still it was refreshing to see that classes has clear roles here. But this is only my opinion and thinking.
I love games that has specific roles so I like the system in this novel. A tank is tanking the mobs and incoming damage, the dps do the damage and the healer only heals the party. Nowadays the games I tried allows tanks to do dps + heal themsleves, dps to somewhat tank + heal themselves and healers to do dps too and tank because of healing themselves. Not my cup of tea.