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DoubleCoN
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2021-05-18 10:48

Just started reading the book about 10 days ago already up to the current chapter. grammer gets better i honestly dont care about grammer that much since ive read some novels through google translate (let me tell you gives you appreciation for it) really enjoy the novel and think it hass a lot of potential. I will definitely support the novel until its finished think its funny how im bumber 6 on supporter list but only started about 10days ago haha keep up the good work dont let people pressure you, youve done a good job just keep it goong not every chapter is going to the most amazing just like not everyday of our lives is exciting!

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Aeternabilis
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Sry, this story has a great premise and is very interesting I have enjoyed it so far however for me romance can make or break a story. His fiancee that killed his brother, ruined his city, tried to kill him etc is scum. She is made out so far to be the first real enemy of the mc. But now it's looking like it's gonna be one of them where she was "forced" to do it or some sht. Maybe to protect the mc from something else. Ending with her getting with the mc, in the end, all is forgiven. I can't stand this tbh... It completely ruins it for me. A female enemy that ends up with the mc. Look's like it will be one of them books... Now a couple of things that are annoying to me as well. She randomly out of nowhere just invites herself in to live with him. He says nothing at all and allows it. Okay, I can ignore this. Then she schemes against the mc getting others to atk him. When he then slapped and spat at her afterwards this made me very excited and looking forward to the future as I thought this will be unique. Something different giving me hope for the book. Now she invites herself onto his fraction by showing the mc a letter that he has to protect her? Then the mc says nothing and lets her join gaining all the benefits and letting his ENEMY on his secret on how he is breaking the rules with a loophole. WTF. This makes absolutely no sense, let's ignore the idiotic thing of letting her in on his secret but I'm sorry she needs protection from the mc? How shtty is this excuse? Isn't she the student rep? She is meant to be stronger than the mc (if he doesn't use his trump card) Plus how will she be in danger at SCHOOL. She will be surrounded by her fans helping her etc... The mc has just lost all of the backbone he had shown earlier, losing all respect I had for him. Every time it's played off with how he will make her "pay" later and how he has all these "plans" for her. I don't give a flying fck what he plans. Were here in the here and now. Great you have plans. That doesn't mean you have to let her completely roll over you all the time until you can eventually in the far future execute them. Plus he has the backing of a power equal to empires what is a tiny family from a kingdom gonna do? Yeah, gl to the author. Not for me

M_W
M_WAuthor

I have been writing RME for 7 months straight now. From the very first chapter until the very latest (Chapter 357). I've encountered lots of lots of different readers, specifically troll, demanding in terms of grammar, sensitive readers who immediately drop the story just because I argued with them, Kiss-my-ass-author-and-I'll-read-your-novel type of reader, and of course there are also a lot of good ones such as patience in terms of story in terms of story, plot, and character development, has a good reading comprehension, corrects me when I'm wrong, suggested me a much better word to use, active and loyal as always from day one till now (You know who you are), those fun ones, those who knows how to ask first before assuming things immediately (which is partly good or bad, depending on what kind of assumptions they thought), and lastly, the most important ones, those who spend money (What? You think this is not good? HAHAHAHA, well, it is indeed, a bit at least, but who doesn't love money here? Anyone? Someone?) I've also encountered lots of lots of difficulties and challenges when writing RME, including Author's Block (Well, every author has experienced this), Self-doubt, Reader Pressure (even when their aren't any, you still get pressured everytime you think that you should write something really good because you have 400+ readers who is paying to read and more that used fast pass or is still in the free chapters), Lack experience (I'm just a new Author with 7 to 8 months experience in writing novels), Lack of Time (How I wish that there would be 48 hours in a day), Lack of Good Content, and many more... Not to make this review long, let's immediately go to the main topic, which is about RME. Additional tags of RME: HAREM and WEAK-TO-STRONG This are(were) the questions I've encountered so far in RME and the questions I've thought: Q: Is RME good? A: Yes! Q: Is RME interesting? A: Yes! Q: Is RME worth reading? A: Yes! Q: Is RME really worth the FastPass and Coins I spent or will be spending? A: A warm and big welcoming YESSS!! Q: Is the Author of RME shameless? A: I'm proud to be shameless! Q: Does the Grammar of RME improves? A: Yes! Chapter 1 to 100 will have plenty of Grammar issues because that was the time when I'm still extremely/absolutely/ultimately new to writing. But, the moment you enter chapter 101 and onwards, you will notice lots of lots of improvements in grammar. Actually, even in the chapter 1 to 100 you will notice that I'm improving. Q: Do you have plans to fix those grammar issues in chapter 1 to 100, or even those few issues in the chapter 101 and onwards? A: No! I've thought about that for so long, and I have decided in the end not to (A few kind and good hearted readers also asked me this. Sorry for that one I've mistaken as a troll, hehehe...) Why? Because this is my first novel, and I thought that it's much better for me not to correct my mistakes here so that when I start writing my 2nd novel I will be able to clearly see my improvements so far (You will also be able to see how much I've improved as well). Q: Is this a Harem? A: Yes! With ROMANCE, and A PURPOSE for why their is a need for a HAREM! Q: Why did you not kill Elizabeth and let the MC keep her as one of her women? A: If you keep on reading till the end of volume 1, you'll know the answer (Not gonna reveal it because not everyone likes spoiler) Q: Why is the development slow? A: One reason is because I suck at writing during the times of chapter 1 to 100, so it ended up with the story development becoming slow (I've fixed that already in the chapter 101 and onwards). Two, this is a THRILLING and MYSTERY, so expect it to have a somewhat slow development. Lastly, it's because I'm writing the present, past, and future at the same time, since the early parts of RME there were still a lot of lacking information (Those lack of informations is part of the catch of RME, because as you keep on reading you will be able to slowly learn more) Q: Is the MC overpowered A: Yes, extremely overpowered. Actually, being overpowered has no limits. However, not in the early parts of the story, because just like what I've mentioned prior to reading this part, RME is a Weak-to-Strong type of novel Q: What can I expect in RME? A: First and foremost, DON'T EXPECT ANYTHING, because you'll only end up disappointed when I unfortunately/accidentally/carelessly not satisfy your expectations. Lastly, just read, please, I don't really know how to answer this question, because even I don't know what to expect in RME, so how do you expect me to answer something that I don't even have a clue about? Q: I mean, what should I expect in the existing chapters of RME? A: Oh, so that's what you meant about... So, what you should expect is... First volume, lots of grammar errors, needs more information, story building need improvements, lots of questionable parts. In short, it has a HUGE room for improvements, that I really should fix but still decided, NO! Second volume, slowly improves in grammar, information slowly being cleared out, story building improved, questions are being answered, interesting developments, more adventures, more characters, as in there is more. In short, this is the part when everything about RME finally getting good. Lastly, for Volume 3, it's still the first chapter of the 3rd volume, so I still won't be able to say what you should expect. Last question: What is M_W? A: M_W is actually a growing team of people that I have founded (M_W Cancer). M_W Cancer, which is me, is the Writer/Author/Chief Editor. M_W Nomral is the Grammar Checker/ Assitant Editor (Just like me, he's new to writing novels, so in chapter 1 to chapter 100 you will find that despite having Grammar Checker there still exist lots of lots of grammatical errors. No worries though, he has already improved and is improving more). M_W FrostCode is the artist of RME, in-charged of the upcoming new book cover for RME. (He's actually just a highschool kid, so please be kind to him. Good in drawing, but he still has a lot of room to grow) Lastly, M_W Miss Fierce is the Proofreader of RME (She's a new member and just like me, she's also new to writing novels, so she's in the process of developing to become a good Proofreader, just like everyone else in the team). Wait, let me ask you one more question before ending: If M_W is a team, then are you recruiting people or is it just a bunch of friends who you accept to be part of your growing team? A: Good question, you can actually apply to be a part of M_W, that is if you have the necessary qualifications. First of all, at this moment we only accept Writers and Artist. So, to join as a writer, you first need to have a story of your own that has more than 50,000 words, has the capability to update daily, active in the team, willing to grow, can follow rules, regulations, and our Hierarchy system, shoud be friendly, needs to have the principles of being an Author/Writer, is a hardworking person, and should be above 16 years old. To join as an Artist, you need to show your own portfolio online of your OWN drawings or arts. That's pretty much everything, because our Artist is only payed accordingly to the market price or the worth of the artwork. If you have more questions, just reply down below and I'll answer them when I have the time. I'll release a new update of the review once RME reached 1 year. HAVE A HAPPY READING EVERYONE!

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