I gave 3 stars to everything other than writing for a simple reason: I couldn't finish chapter 1. Why, you may ask? The grammar is absolutely horroble. Out of around 30 paragraphs I read, at least 20 had one grammatical error, and some even had more. I am in no way a know-all, since english is actually my second language, but it still feels horrible to read something with such a grammar. I am sorry author that I didn't give you a chance, but if you ever update the old chapters to improve the grammar I will definetly try again.
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Nah, I'd rather not. If you want to keep on reading to see if I improve, then go, and if you don't want to see, then don't HAHAHAHAHAHA
I also noticed that but I keep on reading because I see the author is improving and my effort has payed off because the novel just became even more interesting before the volume 2
Seeing your attitude I guess I will change my mind and won't want to. my initial idea was to get to know the situation through the comments and reviews, but seeing your reply where you can't take a critique, is kinda depressing tbh
M_W:Nah, I'd rather not. If you want to keep on reading to see if I improve, then go, and if you don't want to see, then don't HAHAHAHAHAHA
Was that actually a critique? Because I thought you were just trolling like a few other readers I encountered in the past saying grammar this grammar that, like bro have you ever seen a novel that doesn't have any grammatical errors or even mistakes? To be honest with you, in all my 12 years of reading experience, never have I encountered a novel with no grammatical errors nor mistakes, no bullshit, especially to beginner authors/writers, which includes me, and their new novels. Anyways, I don't force people to read my novel by saying 'Please continue reading my novel because I'm trying my best to improve'. I don't use words to prove that I'm improving, I use actions by applying it in this novel. So, if you want to read, then read, if not because their are grammatical errors, then don't read, that's all I'm gonna say. Although I want to have more readers, I can't never change the fact that I make mistakes, especially in grammar since English is not my mother tounge, though I can minimize it which is what you can see in the latter chaps HAHAHAHAHA! I want to really fix the earlier chaps, but I can't because I need to create 8 drafts a day, and my free time would always be be spend in replying comments and reviews like this and doing some other stuffs in real life, before going back to writing drafts again, sad life for me HAHHAHAHHAHAHAA
KilThrall:Seeing your attitude I guess I will change my mind and won't want to. my initial idea was to get to know the situation through the comments and reviews, but seeing your reply where you can't take a critique, is kinda depressing tbh
And a little tip if you want to know whether a novel is good or bad and if it's worth the effort of reading, you can go and view the Top Fan section and base your assumptions using the Top Fan's Contributions. If you see people spending hundreds or thousands of coins to read the novel, depending on the amount of chapters of course, then that novel should be good or has a potential to become good, can't always be apply, but this has always been my way of determining a good novel and a bad novel, HAVE A HAPPY READING My man 😉😉😉
KilThrall:Seeing your attitude I guess I will change my mind and won't want to. my initial idea was to get to know the situation through the comments and reviews, but seeing your reply where you can't take a critique, is kinda depressing tbh
Didn't know that, thank you for the advice. Still, it was not a matter if wheter the plot was amazing or not. What I wondered was if the grammar improved overtime or of you had any plans of going over your past work, which unfortunately can't be measured with numbers since lots of people don't give a f*ck about grammar
M_W:And a little tip if you want to know whether a novel is good or bad and if it's worth the effort of reading, you can go and view the Top Fan section and base your assumptions using the Top Fan's Contributions. If you see people spending hundreds or thousands of coins to read the novel, depending on the amount of chapters of course, then that novel should be good or has a potential to become good, can't always be apply, but this has always been my way of determining a good novel and a bad novel, HAVE A HAPPY READING My man 😉😉😉
HAHAHAHHAHA I will not answer that question, to know if it improves or not is to read the novel. If you're asking if I'm shameless, yes I'm shameless HAHAHAHAHAH!
KilThrall:Didn't know that, thank you for the advice. Still, it was not a matter if wheter the plot was amazing or not. What I wondered was if the grammar improved overtime or of you had any plans of going over your past work, which unfortunately can't be measured with numbers since lots of people don't give a f*ck about grammar
Of course everyone makes mistakes, and as you said, it is almost impossible to find a novel without grammatical or ortographical mistakes. However, at least your first chapter is plagued with them to the point it was really hard to understand the meaning of some paragraphs. Going to the part you have no time, I will give you some advice u didn't ask for, take it the way u want. You can either hire/ask someone to be your editor, which would proof read new chapters and fix old ones. The other option is to reduce just by a bit the amount of drafts you write to improve your past work. Even if you don't thini there are many like me, I am really sure that a lot of people dropped the novel at the begining because of the grammar, which is kinda sad cause the plot seems promising. Still, do as you wish, and if u end up fixing the old chapters I would appreciate if u let me know
M_W:Was that actually a critique? Because I thought you were just trolling like a few other readers I encountered in the past saying grammar this grammar that, like bro have you ever seen a novel that doesn't have any grammatical errors or even mistakes? To be honest with you, in all my 12 years of reading experience, never have I encountered a novel with no grammatical errors nor mistakes, no bullshit, especially to beginner authors/writers, which includes me, and their new novels. Anyways, I don't force people to read my novel by saying 'Please continue reading my novel because I'm trying my best to improve'. I don't use words to prove that I'm improving, I use actions by applying it in this novel. So, if you want to read, then read, if not because their are grammatical errors, then don't read, that's all I'm gonna say. Although I want to have more readers, I can't never change the fact that I make mistakes, especially in grammar since English is not my mother tounge, though I can minimize it which is what you can see in the latter chaps HAHAHAHAHA! I want to really fix the earlier chaps, but I can't because I need to create 8 drafts a day, and my free time would always be be spend in replying comments and reviews like this and doing some other stuffs in real life, before going back to writing drafts again, sad life for me HAHHAHAHHAHAHAA
I once also cared about grammar when reading. At that time, if a novel has a lot of grammatical errors I always drop them. But you see, I noticed overtime that most of the Gems and Good novels I've found has this similar problem called, Grammatical Errors. And also, what I read in novels is the story itself, specifically the story development, world building, characters, the suspense, thrilling, comedy, and such, not the grammar since I can pretty much fix any grammatical errors using my mind. Well, I also read raws sometimes, which are always full of grammatical errors, that's why I don't mind grammatical errors in reading novels anymore. Though I don't apply that mindset when I'm writing this novel HAHAHAHAHA
KilThrall:Didn't know that, thank you for the advice. Still, it was not a matter if wheter the plot was amazing or not. What I wondered was if the grammar improved overtime or of you had any plans of going over your past work, which unfortunately can't be measured with numbers since lots of people don't give a f*ck about grammar
I actually have a Grammar checker, which you can clearly see the moment you start reading, if you have indeed read at least one chapter, it's specifically located at the very topmost part of every chapters, hehehe..... As for what you meant about 'The chapter 1 is hard to understand', can you give me a clear or detail example for that? Of course, it's okay if you refuse me, but I will kindly ask for it so that I can further improve my writing in the latter chapters. You see, me and a few of my friends actually don't feel like the chapter 1 is hard to understand, at all. In fact, chapter 1, at least in the part of the earlier chapters, is what a lot of readers easily understand the most. But since you mentioned that it's hard to understand, I'm now curios to know just what part of it was hard understand.
KilThrall:Of course everyone makes mistakes, and as you said, it is almost impossible to find a novel without grammatical or ortographical mistakes. However, at least your first chapter is plagued with them to the point it was really hard to understand the meaning of some paragraphs. Going to the part you have no time, I will give you some advice u didn't ask for, take it the way u want. You can either hire/ask someone to be your editor, which would proof read new chapters and fix old ones. The other option is to reduce just by a bit the amount of drafts you write to improve your past work. Even if you don't thini there are many like me, I am really sure that a lot of people dropped the novel at the begining because of the grammar, which is kinda sad cause the plot seems promising. Still, do as you wish, and if u end up fixing the old chapters I would appreciate if u let me know
I just reread the Chapter 1 since you have said that it was hard to understand, and I finally realized that you my friend is just trolling me, damn I seriously fell for this freaking troll! HAHHAHAHAHAH! I even bothered reading 118 comments and all the paragraph comments in Chapter 1 just to see if the Chapter 1 was really hard to understand, and guess what, they all f*cking understand it! Bro, please stop causing trouble in my novel by causing the ratings to go down with your 3 Star review, it's really not funny to be honest. If the person you were dealing with was not me, then I assure you that the reply wouldn't be as unforgiving as mine.
KilThrall:Of course everyone makes mistakes, and as you said, it is almost impossible to find a novel without grammatical or ortographical mistakes. However, at least your first chapter is plagued with them to the point it was really hard to understand the meaning of some paragraphs. Going to the part you have no time, I will give you some advice u didn't ask for, take it the way u want. You can either hire/ask someone to be your editor, which would proof read new chapters and fix old ones. The other option is to reduce just by a bit the amount of drafts you write to improve your past work. Even if you don't thini there are many like me, I am really sure that a lot of people dropped the novel at the begining because of the grammar, which is kinda sad cause the plot seems promising. Still, do as you wish, and if u end up fixing the old chapters I would appreciate if u let me know
Welp, you do you. I gave you my sincere opinion, if you can't take a look at your own flaws there is nothing I can do. I just wish that some time in the future you actually go back and improve your past work. Still I don't hold any frudges with you so I would appreciate if you didn't just say I am trolling because you don't understand my comment.
M_W:I just reread the Chapter 1 since you have said that it was hard to understand, and I finally realized that you my friend is just trolling me, damn I seriously fell for this freaking troll! HAHHAHAHAHAH! I even bothered reading 118 comments and all the paragraph comments in Chapter 1 just to see if the Chapter 1 was really hard to understand, and guess what, they all f*cking understand it! Bro, please stop causing trouble in my novel by causing the ratings to go down with your 3 Star review, it's really not funny to be honest. If the person you were dealing with was not me, then I assure you that the reply wouldn't be as unforgiving as mine.
Nope, I completely understand it. It simply means, your a demanding guy when it comes to Grammar. I can't blame you with that though, since everyone is different, and sadly my novel can't pass in your standards for Grammar.
KilThrall:Welp, you do you. I gave you my sincere opinion, if you can't take a look at your own flaws there is nothing I can do. I just wish that some time in the future you actually go back and improve your past work. Still I don't hold any frudges with you so I would appreciate if you didn't just say I am trolling because you don't understand my comment.
You say that, yet just now you repeatedly called me a troll instead of accepting the fact that at least your first chapter is greatly flawed. Still, I took the time to rewrite just a few of the paragraphs on that chapter to prove you I am not trolling in hopes you can ever go back to improve your old work so people like me can actually enjoy your novel.
M_W:Nope, I completely understand it. It simply means, your a demanding guy when it comes to Grammar. I can't blame you with that though, since everyone is different, and sadly my novel can't pass in your standards for Grammar.
Sorry for mistaken you as a troll. Their has been a few of them lately, so I can't help thinking that you're also one of them. I'm currently @M_W Nomral in messenger, so those parts should be fixed in the next few days, hehehehe... Now, I'm feeling a bit of shame HAHAHAHHAHAHAHA guess even shameless people feel shame, am I right? Once again, I apologize for calling you a troll.
KilThrall:You say that, yet just now you repeatedly called me a troll instead of accepting the fact that at least your first chapter is greatly flawed. Still, I took the time to rewrite just a few of the paragraphs on that chapter to prove you I am not trolling in hopes you can ever go back to improve your old work so people like me can actually enjoy your novel.
Not to be impolite, but given that you first thought I was a troll, there might have been other "trolls" with good intentions that just didn't bother to prove you wrong because of your preemptive accusations. Anyway, I really hope you can get someone to foolproof your writings so it can become more enjoyable for everyone
M_W:Sorry for mistaken you as a troll. Their has been a few of them lately, so I can't help thinking that you're also one of them. I'm currently @M_W Nomral in messenger, so those parts should be fixed in the next few days, hehehehe... Now, I'm feeling a bit of shame HAHAHAHHAHAHAHA guess even shameless people feel shame, am I right? Once again, I apologize for calling you a troll.
LOL! I know the difference of Trolls and not, HAHAHAHA! Those people were clearly Trolls because they keep on mentioning things that didn't even happen in the novel. I didn't even write it or mentioned any of those things that they have said, hence I deleted all of them. Additionally, I also noticed that they are all Level 1 or Level 2, reading time is practically close to none, badge is either just Reading Master [1] or Who I am [1], their date of creation is either a week ago or dozens of days ago, and that they have a lot of past reviews and many books listed as being read but doesn't match their reading time. Like for example, can someone who read 146 books be able to only have 0.05hrs of reading time? Not to mentioned that they have a lot of past reviews as well, which makes it even more fishy. Considering all of those factors, it's either they are Trolls or accounts by other Authors. No matter which of those two, they are all freakingly annoying and toxic, to the point that I'm becoming cautious of people who comments or review as it might again be another one of them.
KilThrall:Not to be impolite, but given that you first thought I was a troll, there might have been other "trolls" with good intentions that just didn't bother to prove you wrong because of your preemptive accusations. Anyway, I really hope you can get someone to foolproof your writings so it can become more enjoyable for everyone
why in all your paragraphs you always laughing?
M_W:LOL! I know the difference of Trolls and not, HAHAHAHA! Those people were clearly Trolls because they keep on mentioning things that didn't even happen in the novel. I didn't even write it or mentioned any of those things that they have said, hence I deleted all of them. Additionally, I also noticed that they are all Level 1 or Level 2, reading time is practically close to none, badge is either just Reading Master [1] or Who I am [1], their date of creation is either a week ago or dozens of days ago, and that they have a lot of past reviews and many books listed as being read but doesn't match their reading time. Like for example, can someone who read 146 books be able to only have 0.05hrs of reading time? Not to mentioned that they have a lot of past reviews as well, which makes it even more fishy. Considering all of those factors, it's either they are Trolls or accounts by other Authors. No matter which of those two, they are all freakingly annoying and toxic, to the point that I'm becoming cautious of people who comments or review as it might again be another one of them.
So that my words will not sound like I'm being rude or something negative. And to also lighten up the conversation by a bit, at least I thought so.
DaoOfNaps:why in all your paragraphs you always laughing?
oh nice
M_W:So that my words will not sound like I'm being rude or something negative. And to also lighten up the conversation by a bit, at least I thought so.
