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Item: The Roleplayer [SEE SYNOPSIS]
Rating: 4.2

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MokouFriedChickenLv34yrMokouFriedChicken

This is pretty well made. No grammatical errors to speak of in the few chapters that I've seen. Quite curious to see where you'll steer the plot since the genre's saturated with generic gamer plots. I'll be keeping an eye on this 👍

The Roleplayer [SEE SYNOPSIS]

RileyPetesGeralt

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RileyPetesGeraltAuthorRileyPetesGeralt

Thanks so much for the feedback! I guess I'd love to move this more of an average life with some anomalies, but nothing too extreme like how The Gamer takes it :) Hope to get more feedback soon! Let me know how you'd love to see it go towards.

4yr

RileyPetesGeraltAuthorRileyPetesGeralt

Thanks for your feedback! I'm surprised about the grammar; it was written a while back when my English wasn't the best. We definitely want to avoid the typical, saturated gamer plots and want to add a much more "realistic" flair to it. Love to hear your feedback! - Petesgeralt

4yr

MokouFriedChickenLv3MokouFriedChicken

No problem. Nice to see someone that's trying to add some original flair to the genre. Do kindly return the favor no? (^_-)

RileyPetesGeralt:Thanks for your feedback! I'm surprised about the grammar; it was written a while back when my English wasn't the best. We definitely want to avoid the typical, saturated gamer plots and want to add a much more "realistic" flair to it. Love to hear your feedback! - Petesgeralt

4yr

RileyPetesGeraltAuthorRileyPetesGeralt

Thanks! and definitely will do.

MokouFriedChicken:No problem. Nice to see someone that's trying to add some original flair to the genre. Do kindly return the favor no? (^_-)

4yr

RileyPetesGeraltAuthorRileyPetesGeralt

Hey, glad to see you're a fan. We've recently moved the novel; meaning the uploads will be done there! To access it, you can just search for "The Roleplayer" (same name!), access my novel from my Author's page (right under this title), or the link here: https://***.webnovel.com/book/16717036205964205/The-Roleplayer

4yr