Review Detail of Zarosian in Naruto: The Dovah-nin

awesome start, but when it divulged into being a conversation with little to no reference to who is talking it started fallin apart. i loved the fourth wall breaks, but when ya jump around too much by skipping to different scenes, it... gets weird. the real specific part that falls apart is after the kiba incident, it makes sense, but all the chapters after that stop really making any coherent sense. oh and the way the background scenes of a "secret" universe/people talking bout "specimens" vibe kinda kills it too. its WAYYY to early to do a background like that.