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FalsicLv152mth
2024-09-05 22:42

I got up to chapter 4 but had to stop. The grammar doesn't flow well. The author doesn't describe any emotions beyond telling you that they're happening, and what they do describe doesn't make too much sense. It reads like the author has a list of plot points and is just walking through them. It's like the author is just trying to get to the good part and rushing past the back story.

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