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Reading this I had to tell myself the writing would get better but boy was that nothing but wishful thinking... The story was fine. The characters were fine too. But goddamn, was it so difficult to use an app or get someone to help with the grammar mistakes. If it isn't your main language, you get a slight pass but there are ways to easily avoid these issues. For example, find someone who could teach you, or just use an app like grammarly and pray for the best, or get someone to edit it for you. Part of the issue was there wasn't a lot of people complaining about it, guess their used to it. But for me, this was more atrocious then most MTL's...

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A powerful Yokai in DXD

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Liked it!

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