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It's cool. It's written real well. It's a pretty damn different approach to the whole "OP MC in MHA" thing. The only thing I'm really struggling with is trying to put myself in and relating with the main character. This is definitely something you got to read as an omnipotent being simply watching the chaos unfold on this world. Like personally, I can never be paid enough to care so much about MHA's society and to complain about every damn thing about it to a bunch of kids. Every time he went on a rant, I had to roll my eyes. Because like, why was that needed? Save it for the politicians and rich folks that could do something. *AHEM* This coming from someone who does write pointless rants about things...*Ahem* Anyways! It's a really well written story. I rock with most of it.
As long as it doesn't interfere with the story, the romance doesn't mean much to me. I'll let you handle that. DC romances aren't as complicated as some would think. It could be a character you personally really like. As long as it's written well and isn't dwelt upon. Basically, don't stress about it. When it comes, it comes. Just please, for the love of Mary and Joseph, don't let readers pick anything. Other than that, it's unfortunate he doesn't act like Toji... Toji's cool. So far, Victor is kinda dull. Which can be amounted to the fact that this is just the beginning really. So lets hope he's cooler in the future.
I know it's already obvious but this chapter really made me understand the weight of this power. He's really going to have to give away moments of his life as well as his emotions to control this power. Wow. At first, I thought he was just instantly going to be apathetic. But this is a very creative way to do this. I like it. I like it a lot.
The tremor-tremor fruit/gura-gura no mi is what I've taken away from this. With the dimensional traveling thing, it wouldn't be surprising if there were other people like him. Traveling to different dimensions and doing whatever they want. That chick must've been on her period or something, and decided to take out her frustrations on a city in a dimension that couldn't possibly do anything to defend themselves. Or she's just a psycho that felt the need to do all that for no reason.
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So~ the solution is just killing? No actual humiliation nor room for actual regret. Not even the slightest chance for some character development. No satisfying ending for the victim. Just an uninformative monologue, some murder magic, then *poof!* gone... Mmm~ Pretty disappointed by that. Hopefully the rest aren't like this.
Hmm~ Honestly, I'd probably like it better if I didn't feel like I was in the most epic and intense boss fight of my life just trying to read it. By that, I mean, it looks pretty damn weird to look at. Didn't mean the grammar... The grammar was rough sure, but that's just something to expect from all stories at this point. Can't say I like the fact that we were kind of just, dropped into the story... Because to me, Ian seems l like a bum as of where I'm at right now. Doesn't seem like he has anything interesting about him as a character. No actual personality that I can click with. I think I like the dynamic between him and Morgan though. I think. Still not sure how to feel about it actually. It's just a bonafide simp situation where I'm at. I don't usually see that in fanfiction so I think it's good that it's different. Even if I can't relate to it. That's all I got so far. I would've waited to read more but I lost this boss fight like, 8 times. My will is abysmal at that moment. I'll come back to it later, read more, then see if my rating should change.
Hmm~ First impression... I don't like the interactions between the MC and the main Oshi no Ko cast here. Just didn't feel like it was written well. Perhaps it gets better later. But for chapter 1, I ain't really rocking with it. I'd elaborate more on why I wasn't rocking with it, but there's more chapters to go through to see how the interactions develop. Will just leave the elaboration for later. Aside from that, I think his reincarnation was done well and I hope to see hands thrown.