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DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv143yr
2021-01-30 00:52

Had potential but wow this story went down the drain fast.... MC finds out his “mother” isnt his mother but a friend of his father and she also is the one who killed his mother... then we find out he cant meet his father because he is weak and then almsot immediately after wr find out his childhood friend who is weaker than him is now his fathers disciple.... idk what happened to this story to go this route but it made this story a 2/5

Douluo Dalu: The Grandmaster's Son

D_Blackwell
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13 Chs

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D_Blackwell
D_BlackwellAuthor

Yeah, you didn't understand the story. And no one said that Tang San is weaker than the MC. The whole father ordeal was thoroughly explained. The "mother" is not a friend of the fathers. But thanks for the review.

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That's bad, I started to like the story a little bit *sigh*

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