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THE_WORDSMITH
THE_WORDSMITHLv24yr
2020-08-31 03:29

The story is nice, it has a funny element to it which gave me a very good vibe. I am looking forward to future updates. Suggestions: You need to describe the characters more, like facial features and action details. The world setting needs to be more described as well or it just stays foggy in thee reader's brain.

Joining The Beads Of Love

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Yeah, it's me the author... I really will put in all my efforts to make this book interesting for you guys. I just wanna make you feel happy with my book. Keep supporting dear readers!!

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A very nice book and a great plot and in starting the book was pretty simple but now its started taking a turning to mysterious and secrets things and the character developing is quite interesting so i don't much to say .

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madskie00017
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I am surprised I just found out about this story lately. This was amazingly note-worthy! A time well-spent reading the story. Chapter by chapter, the flow was impressively entertaining. Plot and character building were truly impeccable. The author created a great story to begin with. So much potential for this story. Please give this story a chance! 5/5

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Wow this is so good !!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]love the way the plot I'd developing and the character sketching.. do continue. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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I’ve read the first 7 chapters and I can say that this story is pretty good. Keep it up!

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Light_ray
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It is a good **** romantic story. The MCs Chrystal Zhu and Stephen Yang are well depicted by the author. Based on Reading a first few chapters I analyzed there is a cute chemistry between them. One will definitely enjoy it. Keep it up dear author. lots of love....

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shaeshang
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The story is interesting. I'm only a few chapters but I can tell this novel is good. Good work, author. Five stars and claps for you 👏👏👏👏👏

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Bloom759
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bibiyenini
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The book has the potential of gaining to the top, but I suggest to craft the synopsis into a more powerful one for the readers to grasp into it. All of that and nothing else, good job!

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