Review Detail of Noisymad in Indomitable War God
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Hi Noisymad the author here, I apologize if the quality of this LN is poor, and inconsistent. This is my first time writing one so it's mostly an experiment to find my writing style and hopefully make a good story in the process. Updates will probably be irregular and come out in bursts since I write multiple chapters at once and release them whenever I finish writing them. If you have any suggestions or criticisms please leave them in the comments of the chapters or in the reviews. I will try and learn from all of them. Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy this LN.
Indomitable War God
Noisymad
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There might be a harem way later in the novel but it will need to wait until Shi gets older since he's currently around 10 years old which I'm not comfortable writing any form of romance for even if he has the mind of an *****. There will be a love interest when he gets a bit older but I don't know if I'll do a harem yet. I'll probably see what's wanted later on and make a decision based on that.
Nikhil_Chand:is this harem? i dont think so coz he is a war maniac but this is reincarnation novel so just thought of asking
obviously a 10 yr old doing romance is nonsense. But your comment is contradicting. in start you said there will be a harem later. in end you say you havent thought of harem. what will it be?
Noisymad:There might be a harem way later in the novel but it will need to wait until Shi gets older since he's currently around 10 years old which I'm not comfortable writing any form of romance for even if he has the mind of an *****. There will be a love interest when he gets a bit older but I don't know if I'll do a harem yet. I'll probably see what's wanted later on and make a decision based on that.
Noisymad:There might be a harem way later in the novel but it will need to wait until Shi gets older since he's currently around 10 years old which I'm not comfortable writing any form of romance for even if he has the mind of an *****. There will be a love interest when he gets a bit older but I don't know if I'll do a harem yet. I'll probably see what's wanted later on and make a decision based on that.
I said there might be, not will be, I haven't decided on what I want to do so I want to see what people prefer before I decide. Do you have a preference for one or the other?
Nikhil_Chand:obviously a 10 yr old doing romance is nonsense. But your comment is contradicting. in start you said there will be a harem later. in end you say you havent thought of harem. what will it be?
harem of 3-4 is ok plus it should be logical. girls falling for MC without reason, females strong at start then become so weak that MC has to save them all the time, MC saved them once and now they are all over MC. these are some of the reasons people hate harem. if you wanna do it make sure girls have unique personality but not bitchy. they are independent and capable. Like they have expertise in some are or other and they can help MC. Also they shouldnt be forgotten after their arc is over which usually happens. They should spend time with MC and develop feelings, love at first sight can happen only once with one but not all
Noisymad:I said there might be, not will be, I haven't decided on what I want to do so I want to see what people prefer before I decide. Do you have a preference for one or the other?