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it's just a carbon copy of one piece, nothing more nothing less, a one piece from a different perspective. I thought that after skypea he would go the **** away from the crew and start a real story but welp now he will remain with them till the 2 years separation of the crew then with the excuse of beginning equal from what I understood he will keep being with them... basically a one piece less interesting and from another perspective
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Sadly I have to agree. The story had so much potential, but the author ended up just following canon. At the start of the story the author said he would only follow canon till skypia, but that has passed a few chapters ago but the MC is still letting canon play out. Originally the MC was mean to do his own thing but it seem so like he will stick right on the crew for another 30x-40 chapters. Which sucks since it feels like the author isn’t changing canon. It’s not an issue if he sticks with them till the split up, but he doesn’t need to let canon play out. So what if they don the have strong opponents. They can make up for it in the 2 year gap. He doesn’t need to let them fight to get stronger. Hell it could be a good reason to give them when he splits away from them. He wants strong opponents but he can’t have them as it will limit the crews growth.
Absolutely Right. The Problem here is that Author says, After Getting Goro Goro No Mi, He will Leave and Start his Own Crew, He Didn't. And He Will Stay Forever With them. Getting Ordered By Monkey, Always Behind his Shadow, His Crew Are Really 0 Respect For Him, He Train them and they brush him aside like some support character. always passive Author. Your. Story. Is. Terrible! -5/5
Dragoniax:Absolutely Right. The Problem here is that Author says, After Getting Goro Goro No Mi, He will Leave and Start his Own Crew, He Didn't. And He Will Stay Forever With them. Getting Ordered By Monkey, Always Behind his Shadow, His Crew Are Really 0 Respect For Him, He Train them and they brush him aside like some support character. always passive Author. Your. Story. Is. Terrible! -5/5
why would you make a fanfic but only follow canon, that not the point of fanfic and why have an OC that is useless to the story.
MonkeTroll:What do you mean the story is just fine and not really bad your probably just mad because the author didn’t add the girl you like
Creating a fanfic is hard and many of people who think it is easy to think of a path to the this story but when they try to make a fanfic they can only come up with cliches and not think of others paths to take because they are not intresting or just too hard. the author is probably following the canon and when the time it right just make it different bit by bit. I don’t really know but I jut enjoy it and this is just a fanfic it is supposed to be a persons desire and something else I forgot about.
Martial_Pursuit:why would you make a fanfic but only follow canon, that not the point of fanfic and why have an OC that is useless to the story.