Review Detail of LaPlume in System Nemesis

Hello everyone! As you may have noticed, this novel has been on hiatus for quite a while due to my personal life taking quite a few... unexpected turns! With that said, I'm pleased to say I've returned. After an entire down year, to which I'd like to deeply apologize for, I've decided to pick up the novel again and review and re-write ALL (You've read that correctly) the chapters, thus allowing me to fix some plot holes and narratives. The reason I've done this is that I strongly believe I've matured a ton as a writer, and I hope you'll read it again and notice that the story is a lot, and I mean A LOT, better than the previous version. I sincerely hope you'll accompany me on this new journey that, I hope, will last far into the future.