Review Detail of Frog_King in The Might Of A System Wielder
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Im all for wish fullfilments where the mc has cheats, gets girls just by looking at then, and stuff like that. But what Is the author wishing for🤨🤨🤨 grammar Is fine btw. First off there are a ton of bad overused cliches that literally no one likes. the first is the mom cliche. This is the one where the weak ass mom somehow almost kills her son who is basically a god by hugging him. The mom also makes all the decisions for her child for no reason and controls the “men of the house” Second cliche is the suck mc dick cliche. Usually in a self insert the oc will interact with the mc. In some fanfics the oc may be mean or ruthless to a mc like issei, or the oc could help train the mc like asta or naruto. In this fanfic the oc just sucks the mcs dick. when lida was correcting Izuku for mumbling during the entrance exams (which he shoukd cuz its distracting to other examinees) the oc decided to start laughing very hardly. when lida asked why he was laughing the oc said something along the lines of “ shut up retard faggot dont judge a book by their cover. You are a fucking retard and should die. everyone deserves to be a hero. Izuku will be a great hero and i want him to fuck me Another problem is how the author nerfs the Oc. With the powers the oc has he should pretty much be a god in mha. He Has many powers, Ill give some i remember. Instant mastery, Vector manipulation, space and time manipulation, all elemnt magic or sum, sharingan, and every single strong weapon of all universes in his gate of Babylon. He should pretty much be a god right? WRONG! Overhaul and all for one are stronger than him. also all might in his prime. That is very dumb if you ask me. Now you maybe saying wow you just wasted ten minutes of your time writing this long ass review. well let me tell you why i wasted my time to write this review. I found all these faults And i only read 7 CHAPTERS!! Theres probably way more faults and problems with this book. I am just pissed i wasted my time reading this bs. let me remind you i am ok with wish fullfilment, but not when the author has the wish of being a weak cuck loser who wants the mc to Fucking stick a dildo in his ass
The Might Of A System Wielder
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This is the first review where why I understand you rate it 1 star since you gave every reason why you would think so, So I have to thank you for that. For cliche yes I used them and a lot of then in fact if you continue reading, you could even say I just can't think up about the plot and which you would be right, I can't which is why I stick to the canon a lot more with just minor tweaks than other fanfics. Secondly for the izuka thing, that's just how I want my OC to be, a nice guy that's it so yeah lol nothing much of it. Thirdly, yeah I totally nerfed him during MHA world and there's even plot holes that I even left and know about, but it's only that world I did since it was my first time writing and all, and didn't really thought much of it. I'd you read further into my one piece and Bleach world you could see I didn't nerf him at all and instead just gave him an even more boost of power and I didn't nerf him if your wondering. I nerf him back then cause I though it could make a much more fascinating battle, but I clearly failed which is why not only have I stopped nerfing him but just gave him more power. All in all thanks for telling me your opinion on it, it be good if you can continue pass the world. Thank you.