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Xurora3yrReplied to Loserworld301Ch 49 Hogyoku- Xurora3yrReplied to Frog_King
This is the first review where why I understand you rate it 1 star since you gave every reason why you would think so, So I have to thank you for that. For cliche yes I used them and a lot of then in fact if you continue reading, you could even say I just can't think up about the plot and which you would be right, I can't which is why I stick to the canon a lot more with just minor tweaks than other fanfics. Secondly for the izuka thing, that's just how I want my OC to be, a nice guy that's it so yeah lol nothing much of it. Thirdly, yeah I totally nerfed him during MHA world and there's even plot holes that I even left and know about, but it's only that world I did since it was my first time writing and all, and didn't really thought much of it. I'd you read further into my one piece and Bleach world you could see I didn't nerf him at all and instead just gave him an even more boost of power and I didn't nerf him if your wondering. I nerf him back then cause I though it could make a much more fascinating battle, but I clearly failed which is why not only have I stopped nerfing him but just gave him more power. All in all thanks for telling me your opinion on it, it be good if you can continue pass the world. Thank you.
- Xurora3yrCommented
Imagine this but replace the Merry Christmas with the text.
While waiting for his change, a Christmas card caught his eye. The card didn't seem much, it's just like any other Christmas card you would spot in a shop. The card was red with a Christmas tree in the middle of it. Though that's not what caught Val's eyes. Underneath the tree, there was some writing. The writing says, 'Do you wish for adventure in a new world?' This obviously shouldn't be something written under Christmas card, yet it was there. - Xurora3yrReplied to Urion_LimitbreakerCh 44 Fighting Byakuya
- Xurora3yrReplied to YuuMino
Correct! LOL
Using the skill Alan's Eyes started to change. The pupil stayed the same however the outer iris surrounding the pupil started to somehow distort and replacing it was a clock that has greek numerals, while the inner iris seems to have golden veins popping out. (A/N: I don't really know how to describe it so here's the picture https://susanrowlen.com/the-analogy-of-time/) - Xurora3yrReplied to Ototsu_Yume
Thanks for telling me, I really thought it was one lol. Been a while since I wrote xD
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https://susanrowlen.com/the-analogy-of-time/
Using the skill Alan's Eyes started to change. The pupil stayed the same however the outer iris surrounding the pupil started to somehow distort and replacing it was a clock that has greek numerals, while the inner iris seems to have golden veins popping out. (A/N: I don't really know how to describe it so here's the picture https://susanrowlen.com/the-analogy-of-time/)