Review Detail of L_Arc in A Tale After Four Lives

Alright so plus points first. It updates regularly so yeah. It also has an OVERPOWERED MC. The previous lives of the MC are also very entertaining from what we have seen so far. . . Now to the negative points. The first thing is what’s the point. Like what the absolute **** is he even doing? Went to the devils for a while for what reason? Wanted a house in Kuoh for what reason? Helped the 2 Romeo and Juliet escape for what reason? He literally wasted the wishes. Give me all my weapons of my lives. WTF bro just get magic of creation or something. Not like your character isn’t op enough. Basically whatever he is doing makes no fucking sense whatsoever. Also he is a douchebag. Like there is scum like a certain character from Against the gods novel and there is this guy. He is so passive, I mean if he does think of her as a daughter and now she is clearly interested in him as a romance partner, make it clear to her it won’t be happening. But no, let me ignore this cuz it always fucking works~ It might have been amusing at the start but now he just seems like a bastard for ignoring someone so devoted to him. Casually goes on trips for long periods of time without taking her. Why?? Atleast give a reason. The Character also has no dept. The previous lives are just that. Previous. It’s like he is a totally different guy. Story development till now is zero. Character is also zero. The world development that I was thinking about is also as of yet, zero only places introduced till now is Kuoh, underworld and Kyubbi? palace. . . . . I expected a lot from reading some of the reviews but clearly most of don’t know how to differentiate between quality level works. My advice to Author is to actually read some bedtime stories. They have more character development than yours has had till now.