Review Detail of User177785 in The Ace
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Alright, let me preface this by saying I love this brilliant piece of work and the star rating doesn't really mean anything in the context of this review. So a kid was in a car crash his family dies and he's left within his grandma's custody note: his grandmother is a badass and one of the top 3 most influential people in the world. Back when this first started it was during the summer months so I would always pull all-nighters and wait till 5:30 every morning for a chapter to be released and the pure joy and euphoria I felt when I saw that blue dot next to how many chapters I've read/ how many chapters there are altogether was a great feeling. Seeing Ace improve himself in a way helped me improve myself whenever I went on runs and was tired and just wanted to rest I would think about what would ace do in my situation and I'd push myself. It may seem kind of silly but it worked and that's all that really mattered. The esports aspect was another plus since I myself want to get into the e-sports scene, the hacking aspect at that time I was also researching about how to get started in netsec, and the calisthenics aspect was also a pretty relatable thing to since if I used weights right now I'd only stunt my growth short-living my dream of being able to see the top of my 6 foot 4 brother's head. But anyway everything is great the characters especially the MC, you see a lot of authors on this site trying to enhance other elements of the story that they completely forget to give the MC a personality. Until he started playing with other streamers. Not his group of friends but real-life streamers like Dr. Disrespect and Lupo. Before I didn't know how to convey what was off-putting about it and it led to me just dropping it but I finally figured out what it is but figured it was too late now. So today I found myself pulling another all-nighter and was reminded of this so I said **** it and decided to write this review. So Insidious if you're reading this what I meant to say before was when the real-life streamers are added into the story it takes you out of being immersed in the story and ends up turning into something akin to shitty fanfic I'm sorry to say it so harshly but I really like this story. Alright welp Buh bye, adios, annyeong.
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Before anything, I wish to thank you for taking the time off to write this review. I guess this is probably not the thing you think of when thinking: "Well **** it, let's just pull an all-nighter.". Therefore, I want to thank you, not only for that, but also for the fact that you were fair, stating what you thought was good, and what you thought was bad. For that, again, I thank you. Now, I would like to address your points, I get what you mean, and honestly, it becomes pretty clear that at one point, I begin to share your view, which is the reason while I only make mention of him playing maybe three times, and truthfully, it has nothing to do with the story. Since then, no mention has been made of any 'real-life' people. I understand for some people, it kills the mood, but I just wanted to make sure anyone reading this is aware. Finally, as always, I am both honoured and happy that you like the story, it means a lot, and adding the fact that you were one of the first readers, and was always happy to leave a comment in each chapter, your review is particularly appreciated. I guess that's it, thank you for reading, and good luck on looking at your brother eye to eye. đ