Review Detail of Zac_S in The Ace
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It's just that captivating of a story, however I personally do wish for a better explanation on characters appearances aswell as the world around him, like how it's different to pur world historically as well as the date in which this story takes place.
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Thank you for the review, I understand what you are getting at, for appearances, I am getting there, and for the differences between worlds, there are not many, it is pretty similar except for obviously some of the big companies and made up criminal organisations. Nevertheless, I will try to clarify that in the next few chapters (was planning on it anyway, since it would fit the storyline). I hope you have a good day, and again, thanks for the review.