Writing quality is spot on except for the rare miss spelling. Paragrapgs should also be cut to read easier. Update stability is practically every week so its good. Storry development is good, but gives me the feel similar to Chinese novels, except it's the american version. With less racism. Hopefully. Charachter design is good. I wish he started of older but I'm cool with how he is now. Also wish he was abit more Op. Like Natalie Portman in the movie Lucy. But he would gain power at a slower rate. The being at the bigining should also make an appearance, soon but that's just my opinion. World background is pretty much earth with just afew more baddies and mysteries, so its ok. So over all its a good read that I recommend you try. Keep it up author.
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LIKEThank you for your review, I agree with all your points, I am trying to find a good format, but the way it is displayed on phone and on a browser is different, so I will have to find that sweet spot. I don't have an editor, but when a misspellings is pointed out, I do try and correct it whenever I can. I am happy you enjoyed the story, and again, thank you for your wonderful review.