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2020-06-04 04:22

Writing quality is spot on except for the rare miss spelling. Paragrapgs should also be cut to read easier. Update stability is practically every week so its good. Storry development is good, but gives me the feel similar to Chinese novels, except it's the american version. With less racism. Hopefully. Charachter design is good. I wish he started of older but I'm cool with how he is now. Also wish he was abit more Op. Like Natalie Portman in the movie Lucy. But he would gain power at a slower rate. The being at the bigining should also make an appearance, soon but that's just my opinion. World background is pretty much earth with just afew more baddies and mysteries, so its ok. So over all its a good read that I recommend you try. Keep it up author.

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Thank you for your review, I agree with all your points, I am trying to find a good format, but the way it is displayed on phone and on a browser is different, so I will have to find that sweet spot. I don't have an editor, but when a misspellings is pointed out, I do try and correct it whenever I can. I am happy you enjoyed the story, and again, thank you for your wonderful review.

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So, I have just finished catching up to the current chapters (167 at this point it time), and I have to say, I really love it. The writing quality is quite good, except for the occasional grammar or spelling mistake, and does not do anything to make your reading experience worse or anything of the sort. For stability of updates, I don't really know myself, but by going from when the chapters were released before, it seems quite stable. Now, story development for me was good. The pace for some might seem a bit slow since for the most part, it's just talking about his daily life and stuff, but I find it enjoyable. Most people thought that the grandmother was annoying and didn't like her, but she seemed ok enough to me, and in recent chapters, it clears things up about her so it's fine. The character design of Ace (mc). I enjoy watching Ace's character development and watching him mature, make friends, stream, make music, and all of the sorts. He enjoys his life to the fullest and is a genius, which for me is entertaining. He makes friends easily, and is nice, but is still careful and not naive, and can read everyone like a book. World background, not much to say. The setting is basically the same, starting from about 2015, and shifting events around a little to fit the storyline. There are some real-life people who are included, as well as some made up ones, so nothing too different. All in all, I would recommend this novel, so give it a try, and if you like it, good for you, if not then it's just not for you, so that's that, and we all have our preferences, so it's fine.

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