Well, the story is good and my rating in this story signifies what is lacking First, it lacks details like when two people are talking that is not identifying who’s talking to who kind of a thing. Second, the details in explaining is a little much and makes me bored. Thats all! The story is great in terms of development cause the MC is responsible and is willing to take risk to become strong and goes to the next level of his path.
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