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Jin_Daoran
Jin_DaoranLv105yr
2020-04-01 22:21

Leaps the starting gate and races into the distance so fast you can't appreciate the scenery, is what I'm going to say about this. This reader was anticipating the story to be about a godly blacksmith and got smacked down irreparably on the first chapter. This reader was so happy about it that in hindsight I have to say this: no I'm not a masochist. I'm just disillusioned with blacksmith novels that's all. Godsmithing Otaku is about an otaku that can create gods using a computer app. Excellent idea! Creating gods, making them fight other gods, RL shenanigans with gods, infinite power and mystery! The execution is a bit haphazard however. This is being written for a WPC so I'm not going to go that much into the writing quality. I should say... it needs more baking time? Still, with nine chapters, good start, author! Keep on writing and good luck!

Godsmithing Otaku

Her_Shadow
4.8
66 Chs

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Norah_Koch
Norah_KochLv5

I liked the beginning. Totally interesting stories. I have never heard of a god smith before. That's more than cool enough. There's humour in the story. The world background needs to be explored more. I didn't find any annoying grammar problem. The content is readable and dialogues are engaging. The gods are cute and the author did a good job on their skills. It's a good read overall. Looking forward to more~

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CuteReaper69
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I like it. The story is interesting the characters are not bland. Rail is adorable. I'm glad I found this book. It takes away the boredom during this quarenten.

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Moron
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Seems like a pretty legit novel, I hope you win that WPC. So Good luck I'll be sticking to your story cause I got some spare time, I recommend since due to school closure you should do daily releases to win in that WPC I'll send some of my readers over here too cause I'm gonna be doing daily releases this week.

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IWANTMYDINNER
IWANTMYDINNERLv10

Most novels featuring gods don't handle them too well, either making them too op or not likeable or what have you, but the author here is actually able to pull it off really well. All of the characters are unique and likeable, and the mc isn't annoying so that's a plus. The world is really interesting, um ya. Also, the author's writing style is pretty nice, their english is better than the vast majority of novels on this site. Um ya, thanks for listening to my Ted Talk

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dumdum007
dumdum007Lv5

I kinda like the plot though I don't usually read gaming stories. but I am hooked by this one. It has a unique plot along with good descriptions of the background world. The author has done a good job so far and I look forward to reading more, Just a little suggestion for you... try not using a lot of ellipses and be more descriptive about the MC. Instead of just telling things, try to elaborate things more. I look forward to new chapters ❤❤❤

5yr
ligaro7511
ligaro7511Lv3

The cover of the book is JP from black survival lol.. But after reading a few chapters it looks interesting and has a good grammar so i will give it a 5 for now..

4yr
Henrique_Paiao
Henrique_PaiaoLv6

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4yr
Her_Shadow
Her_ShadowAuthor

What the hell is this story about anyway? I'm just giving this story that one mandatory review, so if you expect to be wowed about how awesome this story is, then you might as well try reading it. It's a story about a guy who happened to get a special application that allows him to create any type of god he wants, man, beautiful woman, Lolita, or child with a click of a button. If you have any questions about the story, please ask below and remember the rule, treat the author like you'd treat a nice woman, or man... Don't kill me with your words please, and hope you enjoy!

5yr
zd4zaas
zd4zaasLv1

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

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