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CailinMatthews
CailinMatthewsLv124yr
2020-04-03 18:36

First, I'd like to say that this is a realistic novel from what I have seen so far. It may not be everyone's cup of tea but I do would like to recommend it. Not only does it tackle emotions and thoughts of the characters but also it is done well. In this kind of scenario, it's easy to over write in describing them. Also, it can be confusing because normally these jumbled inside a person's mind to the point that even the person himself/herself doesn't know how to express them. The novel does well in creating the flow of these emotions and thoughts so the readers could understand and relate it to it, The other thing that's great about this beginning is how it draws readers to the characters. They get to know them immediately based on what they're going through. It helps them become attached and follow through on their journey. Especially for anyone who had gone through heartbreak. There would be that tug to cheer the MC on to get back up and move on with her life for far more better things to come.

Acceptance - The Conscious Awakening

LostInFictions
4.8
148 Chs

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Thank you very much for the generous review.

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kazesenken
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There's something to be said about how the first moments of this book can instantly grip you and hold you in constant wonder about how things will turn out. From the well-written prose, to the dynamic character interactions, and moments of raw emotion - this is a novel that captures an audience from the get go and slowly reveals the world around a relationship turned sour. After we are presented with the premise of the novel, the way it is written encourages the reader to search for the answer, to figure out just what had happened to lead the characters to this point. Even normally mundane events are laced with tidbits of characterization and clues, all leading towards the big picture. The journey towards this is eloquently displayed through the character interactions. Though I spotted a few typos, these are easily ignorable. If you are looking for a novel with a lot of heart and you are prepared to have yours tugged along for the ride, then you can certainly give this novel a try.

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RedPandaChick
RedPandaChickLv10

Loving this. I can totally relate to Irene and Ayden. I have been in both positions and the author has captured all of the messed up/soul shocking emotions felt. Some minor grammatical errors, but excellent read! So looking forward for more. Many thanks, Author!

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Eerie_Olivine
Eerie_OlivineLv3

Alright. I read all the available chapters right now. The author has a way of describing people's thoughts and emotions which help understand her characters. The title is called 'Acceptance' and now I can see why. So far the 6 chapters cover the night of the breakup. Each scenario play an important part on wha goes through it. We see both of the characters' sides and the road of getting over a breakup is long and rocky—especially over what happened. Both parties took a toll instead of the usual one sided hurt we often see because one of them turned out to be the antagonist of the story and showed no remorse. For improvement, I recommend adding more physical description like how the characters look like and other significant things around them. It wouldn't need to be everything but some of them do add character like what color is a person's room. Clothes also do the same. Anyway, I hope this story goes far! So the MC would reach happiness!

4yr
Gabriella_x
Gabriella_xLv13

Reveal spoiler

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amateur_reader
amateur_readerLv5

To the ardent readers out there , this book offers u an insight to a heartbroken soul. U can find it relatable if u have been through the same . Her journey can open u to new perspectives.

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Toastiee
ToastieeLv10

I usually read fantasy books and litRPG, so this novel is a really different thing for me to read. However it is probably one of my favourite novels in my reading list, it's such a good read. Explaining emotions and the troubles that Irene and the people around her go through, it's a sad but a very touching thing to read. It shows the faults we have as humans but then it also shows the things that we should be proud of, I'm looking forward to continue reading this novel and what will become of Irene. Thank you Author :)

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floramagical12
floramagical12Lv2

Beautiful story😍😍................................. Author never disappoints her reader she always come with good story which express all the emotions💕💕

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bestreaderbordZ
bestreaderbordZLv3

Just amazing writing from this author. I hope you go far because you are doing a good job. The novel is wonderfully written, a near perfection and I love it.

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Overlord_Venus
Overlord_VenusLv14

Well, I started to read this story just because it is my competitor in WPC. Well, glad I read it. The story begins in what looks like a normal quarrel when you see how the ML screw things up....grandly. By the end of the first chapter, I was getting angry at the ML (I am shocked that I could feel anger) for what he did. The story is nothing new based on my reading experience but the way in which the author delivers it, you can expect a wonderful story. you will feel yourself emotionally drawn to the characters, but (don't break your phones out of anger folks, they are expensive). All I can say is that the author seems to know what she is doing. Had this not been a WPC entry, I could have leisurely read this but as a competitor, I am going to stint on my praises, humph.

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