Alright. I read all the available chapters right now. The author has a way of describing people's thoughts and emotions which help understand her characters. The title is called 'Acceptance' and now I can see why. So far the 6 chapters cover the night of the breakup. Each scenario play an important part on wha goes through it. We see both of the characters' sides and the road of getting over a breakup is long and rocky—especially over what happened. Both parties took a toll instead of the usual one sided hurt we often see because one of them turned out to be the antagonist of the story and showed no remorse. For improvement, I recommend adding more physical description like how the characters look like and other significant things around them. It wouldn't need to be everything but some of them do add character like what color is a person's room. Clothes also do the same. Anyway, I hope this story goes far! So the MC would reach happiness!
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