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flosvloomLv42yr
2022-02-05 09:12

First of all, the writing quality is great since it was really easy to read the flow of the story, and although there were a few grammatical sentences, you can still read it like a flowing water. The development of the story was slow-paced but it has a good potential. The world building was specially great and it made the whole story interesting to read. One thing that really botheres me was how the author force relationship on the protagonist... like how the relationship between Cleo and Sophie became how it was... there was no struggle or obstacle at the beginning of their relationship... and their relationship felt very superficial to me... although they both prioritized each other but with how their relationship begun... it just felt too lacking with the beginning of their relationship... on the other side, Sophie's (MC) relationship with Astrid, Qiana, and Rachel was very understandable... the four of them have that special event where they became close because of their environment and circumstances... but the author chose to separate these four and only left MC to Cleo which I think the heroine. However, I like the plot of the story.. it was interesting... but the romance was a little lacking, although, the author made sweet flirty and fluffy scenes between MC and the heroine... but still felt too lacking and it just felt like a shallow relationship... I was a little disappointed with the romance considering that it has a yuri tag.

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Shameless Author Review! If you love sci fi future cultivation novels with a strong but broken female lead then this is the book for you! The novel has the action, the ships! and some crazy plot twists! (maybe not in that order) Anyways please give it a try my dear future reader ❤️❤️

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Its a great novel with lots of potential. It promises both cultivation, character development, world building, cool sci-fi and lots more to look forward too.

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I think this one will be a very interesting story. I get this feeling of new and refreshing world story. I'm very anticipated to read this work as a whole! Do your vest Author-sama!!

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Overall the novel the author has great ideas but the execution is terrible. Aside from the fight scenes most of the social interaction/slice of life is terribly boring. There is really nothing interesting going on aside from the main character discovering her hidden heritage.

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fascinating world-building. I like Sophie, spunky and creative. I like the layering of modern issues in this fantasy meeting sci-fi. Keep writing!

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