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For me this is something unprecedented, I actually came up of a story just like this, but was never able to see how it would develop. So when I first saw this title in the newer novels, I merely glanced, however when I looked closer I was intrigued by the cover for it looked like as if it isn't something that I couldn't simply scoff at. I praise the person who did the cover, for it got me to give this a good read, And for your info I was a bit stunned. The starting is sort of typical and the straight forward accepting attitude got me a little stumped at first, but when I read the next chapters, it didn't look so typical afterall. And when I reached to the point of the world building. Of its magic and cultivation, It seemed that the design is really evening out. Further more though, when we got to the inheritance I was a little taxed by how another person can just enter that space but so far it's really improving. Ps. I like the transformation and the character design. A good story, really ty and I hope it updates quicker bcs I can't help but to impatient bcs to me the story resonat d with my bcs of its own uniqueness.

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