Review Detail of Tris117 in Sleeping Next to the Pirate King

This was pain to read. I have no idea why this story has such a high ranking 🤦‍♀️ I understand that English is probably not first language of the author, but is it so hard to get a grammar check reader? Characters are... weird. Mila is deus ex machina that can do absolutely everything despite being just 18 y.o. Author claims that Mila is studying History and Fashion Design, yet author themselves know absolutely nothing about those two. 1600-1699 is 17th century ffs not 16th 🤦‍♀️ And corsets? People didn't sleep in them (perhaps only few individuals did but not majority). Also they aren't meant to hurt. If they hurt, they are used the wrong way. Then the cursing and vulgar language. Sure, it's normal to use vulgarisms (I also use them a lot) but this was simply too much. Does author think that overusing them will make Mila look more cool? How old is the author smh? 12? Last but not least, the plot holes. Mila's female bodyguard cut her long hair to short ponytail, yet only few chapters after this mention Mila has long hair again? What? What magical hair serum is Mila using? 😮