I get that they're children but seriously that's not okay if it's enough for someone to squirm on the ground in pain and then the children play like it's a joke they could be considered psychotic it just feels immensely irresponsible to disregard a behavior like that.

Writing Quality for this site this writing quality is mind-blowing in the grand scheme of things there are points to criticize, but if you're reading off of this website this is top-notch. Stability of Updates from what I understand from reading about the updates, they're rather sporadic in their timings; of course, this could be a problem of timezones but the timing on the updates always seems off for me, though they usually upload 2 chapters a day. Story Development, honestly, this story's development is really creative as it strings together the relatively uncreative stories into something more interesting with the reader (The MC) going through the various worlds and seeing the influence he has on them is still a wonderful experience. Character Design, unfortunately, this is where the novel dips a bit, as the characters are in my opinion too linear; their goals and ambitions and even their personality as a whole seem very rudimentary; of course, this novel still is leaps and bounds better than some of the stuff on this site but the character design is about at the quality you would expect from a weekly featured or a top novel on this site. World Background honestly this is always a complex thing to rate but I would say that the world background presented in this novel far surpasses what you would expect as the background of each world is thought out and well planned it's missing a stroke of brilliance from the writer in my opinion but it is still perfectly fine but it seems to be a missing inspiration but I can see why the author would have trouble finding a passion in his writing as each world are very different. Overall Review - Overall this is a good novel it's not something that I'd be checking every day but if I happen to be looking to read something this is pretty high up on my mental list the author clearly respects his work and is very professional in the way he writes things and he is a textbook standard author which can be both good and bad. Good in the way that he is meeting every expectation that I hold for my novels currently. Bad in the way that he's missing a spark of inspiration "A stroke of brilliance" so to speak, whether that be in some characters the story, the world, and sometimes even the MC himself is missing a certain spark that I believe would push this novel even higher than it currently is. (4.2/5) Hope this helps you decide whether or not to read this.

Why do you do this to me I have traveled far and wide only to be met with false hope.

Sexist much?

I was thinking along the lines of a more mystical approach like how fortune tellers look at your palm and tell you you're "destiny" or rather fortune.

The hotter a flame is and depending on the source in which the flame comes from changes colour

I honestly don't know if I would it would depend on the circumstances but it wouldn't matter to me their gender maybe their age but people who decide not to kill someone based on their gender I hate with a burning passion if I were to kill someone their gender wouldn't matter their age and circumstances are the things I would take into account.

You're being ridiculous I understand believing in something but pushing that belief onto others and enforcing your will to accomplish your own selfish goal is blindingly stupid. If you truly thought about the cause and effect of your actions you would be a better person.

Never understood why people used "Woo" to describe crying I don't particularly think crying sounds like that though to be fair their isn't really a fit onomatopoeia if you can even call it that.

I'm never going to the What's Next section again.

Big baby is disturbing.

Oh no

Fore-shadowing

Tsundere Lin Fan

No shit sherlock