I like that there is an auxiliary chapter for some details to keep things organized. The plot is moving at a good pace. Good character design as well . . . However. The writing. I advice you proofread. The capitalizations are everywhere and as a reader it had distracted me. I suggest you to lowercase the characters when constructing a sentence. (E.g. “The Work Is Good And Amazing” will be hard to read, so instead “The work is good and amazing.” Would give you a better flow on the narration as the readers won’t be distracted while the author conveys what happens. Keep on writing.
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