Let me be honest, this is one of the few fanfics I read that weren't overrated. the story development is kind of fast but it is an awesome story nonetheless. what I suggest is trying to add some chapters following his small quests as well. the author does well with the main plot. however he can improve his book by doing something like the original author. I mean the original author forces alot on all the quests and character development while this author skips over the small quests. it was kind of stunning how quickly the main character grew strong enough to lift up the sky while only showing disconfort and dread in not being able to move. I mean, come on, percy and annabeth weren't able to hold it too long without losing all strength. however, I still believe this fanfic is awesome in it's own right. I mean, he literally added in some extra demigod powers that were not seen before. the author was abrupt though when Max met the Roman's. didn't expect that inclusion. glad there is another percy Jackson fan.
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