Ok, so I'll write a self-critic for new readers to see. I have to admit that my story, especially in the first few chapters, has a heavy Xianxia influence, but not in a bad way. Up until now, I haven't received a single complaint about that, just that some people find it weird. The chapters are short. As this is my side-project, I took the liberty of writing 600-word chapters, to give me more creative freedom and to have more motivation to edit them once they're finished. Then again, with my current three-chapters-a-day release rate, it should be negligible. Anyways, that's all I have to say for anyone new. If you decide to read it, I hope you enjoy it even half as much as I enjoy writing it! -Oh, and Madara is not a pedo, take that as you may. Peace!
T0X1N
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LIKEI still don't have it figured out, but the possibility is still there. I'll just go with the flow, like I always do... If it makes sense, it will happen.
KoroSensei14:Any romance planned for the future when he gets older?
T0X1N:I still don't have it figured out, but the possibility is still there. I'll just go with the flow, like I always do... If it makes sense, it will happen.
T0X1N:I still don't have it figured out, but the possibility is still there. I'll just go with the flow, like I always do... If it makes sense, it will happen.
InnerVoice:Quick question before I read this, what is the timeline the boy that madara reincarnated as? Like is he in boruto, beyond that, or the least likely still in Naruto time
FangMing:I just have one question. If you plan to do a romance for Madara, will it be harem or not? This question is important to me when adding a story to my library. For reference, I don't like harem. I hate the Harem.
T0X1N:Yo mumba join my discord so I can educate you on why I'm constantly deleting your review
Mumbajumba Reading Status: CO O 14 minutes ago : This story keeps giving me "it's a Chinese cliche xianxia novel" vibe all of the time dheidbwienbdpwbdownfkemdjdlwbeod wkdnfeklebfownejdlebdodnwjd on book for eielebdeoeiendoekehekdboebdiejedkeleheneoeodbjrcijdmeofnreodndkdjemdboef if dodbfoebdpedjbekshd djd This is your review. It wasn't even that bad? First of all, you just read to chapter 14 only. Not to mention the fact that your criticism is not constructive, you're just spouting opinionated nonsense about xianxia and the way its written. Your true, first review was 4 stars, and I have a screenshot to prove it. Now you're repeating the same nonsense without the random letters and staying you'll continue all day, and giving even less stars. Your review is not valid, because not only is it not constructive, but it doesn't review the book itself, and you didn0't have the defense to read all available chapters. With that said, have a good day and leave my novel. You gain nothing from being an annoying asshole with opinionated views that have no backing whatsoever since you only read the first few chapters.
Mumbajumba:No, if you didn't notice my first review wasn't even that bad
Reviews are there for people to share their opinions. And me saying that your novel is full of xianxia elements doesn't mean that my review is not constructive and that's true because IT IS full of cliche xianxia elements. Even if you are saying that you deleted my review because it wasn't constructive, it means that you are a hypocrite. Otherwise you would have deleted all of the non-constructive reviews without looking at the stars. The reason my first review was different is that I can't be bothered to memorize all of the reviews I leave on the novels in here. And the fact that I read 14 chapters at that time doesn't change the fact that your novel still has tons of cliche xianxia elements and if you had bothered to look at how I allocated my stars you wouldn't have deleted it since I didn't allocate them without thinking . (ı read 8 more chapters after that review) I didn't even give you a one star review and you started bit**ing about it by deleting my review. the only reason your novel is in my library is so that I can leave my review there when you delete it again.
T0X1N:Mumbajumba Reading Status: CO O 14 minutes ago : This story keeps giving me "it's a Chinese cliche xianxia novel" vibe all of the time dheidbwienbdpwbdownfkemdjdlwbeod wkdnfeklebfownejdlebdodnwjd on book for eielebdeoeiendoekehekdboebdiejedkeleheneoeodbjrcijdmeofnreodndkdjemdboef if dodbfoebdpedjbekshd djd This is your review. It wasn't even that bad? First of all, you just read to chapter 14 only. Not to mention the fact that your criticism is not constructive, you're just spouting opinionated nonsense about xianxia and the way its written. Your true, first review was 4 stars, and I have a screenshot to prove it. Now you're repeating the same nonsense without the random letters and staying you'll continue all day, and giving even less stars. Your review is not valid, because not only is it not constructive, but it doesn't review the book itself, and you didn0't have the defense to read all available chapters. With that said, have a good day and leave my novel. You gain nothing from being an annoying asshole with opinionated views that have no backing whatsoever since you only read the first few chapters.
And I have all of the rights to leave reviews without reading all of the chapters since there are no rules against me doing so. Otherwise it would simply be impossible
T0X1N:Mumbajumba Reading Status: CO O 14 minutes ago : This story keeps giving me "it's a Chinese cliche xianxia novel" vibe all of the time dheidbwienbdpwbdownfkemdjdlwbeod wkdnfeklebfownejdlebdodnwjd on book for eielebdeoeiendoekehekdboebdiejedkeleheneoeodbjrcijdmeofnreodndkdjemdboef if dodbfoebdpedjbekshd djd This is your review. It wasn't even that bad? First of all, you just read to chapter 14 only. Not to mention the fact that your criticism is not constructive, you're just spouting opinionated nonsense about xianxia and the way its written. Your true, first review was 4 stars, and I have a screenshot to prove it. Now you're repeating the same nonsense without the random letters and staying you'll continue all day, and giving even less stars. Your review is not valid, because not only is it not constructive, but it doesn't review the book itself, and you didn0't have the defense to read all available chapters. With that said, have a good day and leave my novel. You gain nothing from being an annoying asshole with opinionated views that have no backing whatsoever since you only read the first few chapters.