It's a nice story! From what I understood it's a book written by two authors, right? Which, in my opinion, is more difficult to create, so you both did a really good job. Some advise I might give you is once you finish the book, put it aside for a bit and then check if there are some grammar mistakes, however don't worry about it too much while you're editing your first or second draft. Remember that the more you write and read, the more you grow as a writer. Keep writing! ❤️
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