I really like this novel ❤. Just give it a chance. L First 2 to 3 chapters are a bit rushed but after that it's awesome. Man is the demon general a badass. Give this a try and I'm sure you won't regret it.

Now I've been In love with his one. The characters are not without backgrounds. All of them have some backstory. Some characters are especially badass ,like the Demon general , he's one of my fav's. If you're going to give this book a chance then keep in mind there are some errors as the Author is new. But he's has improved a bit chapter by chapter. Trust me you're not going to regret reading this.

Really good novel recomended to read, the novel has very few typos and every thing flows smothly the charecters feel alive and eveyone till now seems to have a backstory overall i like it so do read to try for yourself

AMAZING AND COOL. Two words to describe the concept, plot, pacing, and flow of the story. Although there are things you need to pay attention to: the use of commas, and capitalizations. But overall, grammar is good. Chen reminded me of Chen from EXO, I don't know why, haha. But yeah, this book is another must-read.

Interesting start. Grammar could use some work. Capitalization is missing in some parts and some sentences are missing a linking verb or two. Prose would drasticlly improve with grammar, as well as using more descriptive words. Dialogue is fine, so long as the grammar of them improves. I might suggest that you use a "said" replacement cheat sheet to add some more spice to the dialogue, as wellas swapping the Prologue and World Info chapters for more consisteny. Over all a very remarkable effort. Keep on writing 👍

The pacing and the all out writing of the first 2 chapters was a bit off and confusing. But my god, the pacing of the 3rd chapter was amazing. The demon general was a badass character that I hope we get to see more of

My book my rules ... Well it you like the novel then a big thanks and if there are any problems or suggestions feel free to tell me (honestly don't ) Well see in our journey to the end..............

omg, I love this fanfic, I was about to go to sleep but I found this and I couldn't stop reading it. pls, don't drop this........... ........................................................

Hello this is the author. Well this is me asking for something which concerns the future of story so go to ch 5 and give your opinions. Hurry.

Well I have liked the story till now. It's been a ride of emotions for me like in ch 4 I felt so bad for the kid and in the previous chapter I loved the demon knight. Please just don't make the demon knight a useless character.