It's a decent read but quite confusing on the whole. I think it's because too many concept are being blend together before prior concepts are firmly established in the mind. All in all, its a kingdom building fic where the kingdom and the people in it are practically worthless considering each battle is ultimately decided by 2 or more heroic spirit type heroes with all the firepower there of. For example, throwing a spear tends to anihalate most of the opponents army, etc etc. It kinda makes the whole battle worthless, along with the existence of soldiers and such... Which makes all the kingdom and army building aspects kinda useless...
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